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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
4/16/2009 |
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AWESOME Twosome! Collab!
Such undying Loves passion frothing and bubbling at the edge!
Both your verses intertwine magically and romantically William and Amber! ((Viv))
Much read between the lines, let the consummation begin!
As words explore TWO WANTING Souls!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings of Love, Light and WARM HUGS, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
4/14/2009 |
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| So romantic, you two do surely know how encouragment to each other counts in your lives and others like to read about you two and share in your life too. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
4/5/2009 |
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Your two voices mix beautifully in this poem. There's a strong feeling of longing that stretches across time. Fantastic writing:)
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
4/3/2009 |
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This is a great collaboration from two talented and gifted writers.I enjoy reading this romantic poem,Great job you 2,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Carol Surber |
4/2/2009 |
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Romantically sweet words...from two AD authors that ROCK!
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
4/2/2009 |
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As usual an absolutely wonderful write between two of our finest. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy |
4/2/2009 |
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Love is the most exquisite pain known to mankind. Distance is a matter of mind. Miles cannot diminish the longings nor can it ignore them. Consummation is the only cure, but with it comes the curse of memories that make being a foot apart seem like half a world.
Well written.
Bobbi |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/1/2009 |
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Two lovers yearning for fruition setting the page ablaze with your passion! You two really can burn up the night!;-)Superb collab!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
4/1/2009 |
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William, Thank you once again for the honor of collaborating with you. It is always a pleasure and a unique experience. I believe this one really shines as truly a magnificent piece of emotionally charged literature! Two kindred souls unite once again!
I wish you peace, light and love, and hugs,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
4/1/2009 |
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First of all William this poem is beautiful
So much emotions and pain and love
But trough this perfect chosen words of the first part
The feelings and love felt it’s true
But afraid of change
And in the second part she is hopeful and willing
To wait till his heart it’s ready to face that
He can’t go on this way and must let his heart
Make the choice,
A beautiful love story and collaboration
A stunning look of heart torn between two loves
Sending you Peace Love and Light…..Yolie
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
3/31/2009 |
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| super collab William, smooth and tender, cheers |
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| Reviewed by Johanna Fields |
3/31/2009 |
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| A great read that I enjoyed reading hugs Johanna |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
3/31/2009 |
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| Your hearts speak what they feel...much love and pain mixed in this awesome collaboration! |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
3/31/2009 |
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| Breathtakingly Beautiful. Such poignant heart felt writing in this collaboration of two unique souls finding common universe and ground! WOW............M |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
3/31/2009 |
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This poem is filled with beauty and poignant thoughts, a heart tugging write you two...excellent William and Amber
peace and love, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/31/2009 |
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He said, she said, beautifully - well done, William and Amber.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/31/2009 |
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Two sides of a coin here and like a coin many similarities but also some distinct differences. In the first have you can feel the want and desire but also the acceptance of what must be, in the second part you also feel the want and desire but instead of acceptance a hope that he will change his mind and find a way. Interesting collaboration...well done.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
3/31/2009 |
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Very beautiful William and Amber.
Such sweet sorrow.
Blessings
((( SEMPER FI )))
Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey |
3/31/2009 |
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What a beautiful love story to one another. Perhaps like Robert Browing and Emily Dickinson. Interesting write the way one person expresses their feeling while the other follows.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
3/31/2009 |
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Like Tell's arrow and the apple, the poem come together if one hits the other, the arrow flies because the presence of the apple, the apple is there because the arrow. The last momentum...when they are together sharing the pain.
Great collaboration, don't ask me who's the arrow.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
3/31/2009 |
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| Oh my,very well written as always great job to both of you..have a wonderful and safe day ...Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/31/2009 |
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Powerful write, William and Amber; bravo! Brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. ;D |
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| Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain |
3/31/2009 |
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Oh such pain I'm so familiar with! You've both put it in verse so eloquently it seems you used tears for ink! Excellent write!
Cynthia |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
3/31/2009 |
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| HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL, VERY ROMANTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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