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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
6/28/2009 |
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| ITSN'T IT MARVELOUS HOW THE WONDERS OF GOD'S CREATIONS ABOVE CAN ENABLE US TO SEE 'HIS WILL' IN THE SHADOWS BELOW. GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR SHARING THIS SO WELL WRITTEN WORK. JOYCE |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/15/2009 |
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Intense feeling throughout this poem. The ending surprised me a bit. Great descriptions:)
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
6/3/2009 |
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Beautiful visuals to this soft romantic poem, William...just lovely
peace and love, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
6/3/2009 |
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| Beautiful writing sweet man..have a wonderful and safe day..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/2/2009 |
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| Love the imagery in this gem, William!...ET |
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| Reviewed by R.D. Pounds |
6/2/2009 |
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A fantastic mood piece with a powerful pointe...I love the way you describe the contrasts...
Great!
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/2/2009 |
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| ....stunning William |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
6/2/2009 |
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| Such beautiful writing. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/2/2009 |
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When she converts herself into the first sight your eyes try to focus in the morning...man, you are really in love.
Georg
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
6/2/2009 |
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| smooth as a babies behind William, great romantic verse, cheers |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/1/2009 |
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William:
Surrounding me with indigo brilliance,
your energy seeps into my mind
illuminating those empty places
that only your love can penetrate.
Seemingly, innocent that light
transports me to your door
embracing your heart with mine
and kissing your waiting lips.
Only time is our enemy,
and amongst the stardust
those specs of iridescent love
scatter all over our bodies
to bring joy and love
back into our empty hearts.
Come bathe in the iridescent stardust
swim into the sea of love
rendering all resistance helpless
within our ever loving embrace.
Send me not home, for my journey has been overdue,
love me this stardust night,
and hold precious this memory for the rest of your life.
An automatic response to this beautiful poem you have written...
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
6/1/2009 |
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| Ah, do you always know how to capture a woman's heart. Your words are tender and so daling. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/1/2009 |
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Oh, this is beautiful, this pre-dawn awakening, the early morning yearning - well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by The Bear Paw |
6/1/2009 |
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Hi William, You are right up there with the greatest romantics of all time! A lovely pen.... thank you for sharing this...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/1/2009 |
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| a beautiful write |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/1/2009 |
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| A marvelous piece, D'Artagnan - both nature wise, and extremely passionate. |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
6/1/2009 |
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Beautiful! Truly Endearing To the Power of Romantic Love
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Embraced~Embrassι
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
6/1/2009 |
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| So beautiful William, you are a fine romance writer. You know how to make your reader "feel" the emotions in your poetry. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/1/2009 |
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Beautiful write, William; very well penned! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/1/2009 |
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| VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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