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| Reviewed by Debra Bateman |
9/16/2009 |
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| This is touching and beautiful William. : ) |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
7/16/2009 |
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| Sad. Your pen stirred my emotions, which is not an easy task. Well done. |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
7/10/2009 |
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| Sometimes crying helps to cleanse the inner soul! A touching poem....M |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
6/30/2009 |
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A powerful and emotional written piece,take care.You are a great poet
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
6/27/2009 |
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| YOUR PHRASES PRODUCE VIVID IMAGERY IN THIS POEM THAT BARES A PART OF YOUR SOUL. WELL WRITTEN AND THANKS FOR SHARING. GOD BLESS. |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
6/22/2009 |
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| This is an awful feeling when one loves so deeply. |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
6/17/2009 |
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Thank Goodness Some Dreams Do Not Come True
or are just a bad dream.... |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
6/17/2009 |
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This is a fear that many think about William, a most powerful and touching write...
love and peace to you, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
6/16/2009 |
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| I love the "simplicity" of this, William. It is pure and crystal, just like how one thinks with such amazing clarity on first waking from a very vivid dream that delves deep into the emotions. Our inner thought life can often be the only thing that is keeping us alive, and we cherish it. This poem also highlights the priceless treasure that is memory... how life can ebb away when that goes. Bittersweetness here. Thank you, Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
6/16/2009 |
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Powerfully written... well done!
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
6/15/2009 |
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| How this pulls at the heart. Beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/15/2009 |
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Very touching. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/15/2009 |
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Striking in it's painful but real emotional worry for love that could someday fall apart.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
6/15/2009 |
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| Vow!! I find much inspiration in those words, for they have great profound meaning!!! Keep on allowing the Lord to inspire you. |
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| Reviewed by jing javier |
6/15/2009 |
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| i'll wipe away your tears... :) |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/15/2009 |
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| LOVELY!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/15/2009 |
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Believe me, Tarzan did the same when Jane left a Dear John letter!
Georg
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/14/2009 |
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These words come from a deeply rooted love. No fear, it was only a dream. I am sure you will never stop thinking of her....
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/14/2009 |
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..inspiration in your words...as we need to embrace each day,,,heartfelt William.
Love and Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
6/14/2009 |
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The dream must have been frightening, William. Dreams bring our fears to consciousness as well as our deepest feelings. So many times we hide our feelings under the guise of strength--until something like this brings them to the surface. The release of tears is the heart's comfort. Beautiful expression of your love for her...
Lin |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
6/14/2009 |
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| Oh my..So sad but I can feel the love you have within these lines sweet man....have a wonderful and safe night OK..Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/14/2009 |
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(((HUGS))) and prayer, William - hope you are okay.
Karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey |
6/14/2009 |
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Bill,
Sad, but showing your love how much she means to you. Great.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/14/2009 |
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| That indeed would be a very sad day. Packed with emotion |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/14/2009 |
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So sad; hope you areo okay, William! You are ever in my prayers~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
6/14/2009 |
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This I like, William. And what a sad day to contemplate.
-gene. |
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