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Ten In All
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William Bonilla
Tuesday, June 16, 2009
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One, two, three
Four, Five
I counted twice
Those beautiful digits
On your feet
I love
Your cute little toes.
One, two, three
Four, five twice
I count digit toes
I see them painted
Fire engine Enamel red.
One, two, three
Four, five
That’s no jive twice
I counted
Sensuous digit toes
Desiring to kiss them
From one to ten
From ten to one
Again and again.
One, two, three
Four, five twice
I count
Ten digit toes, on your feet
I look into your eyes
As I place the first digit
Between my lips
Like a hungry asp
does its prey
I swallow it slowly
Not looking away
It might take all day.
One, two, three
Four, five twice
Once again
I begin to count
As we fantasizes
Our way to a heaven
We’ve come to desire
A sensuousness acquired.
By: William Bonilla
“D’Artagnan”
06/16’09
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
7/23/2009 |
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| You were having one of those toesy days!...M |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
6/30/2009 |
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Nice poem
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/30/2009 |
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An intimate and cute moment you bring to life. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
6/27/2009 |
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| DONE WELL...YOUR POETS SKILLED PHRASES TAKES THE READER JUST FAR ENOUGH SO AS TO PROMPT THEIR OWN IMAGINATION....BLUSH! GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR THE SHARE. |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
6/22/2009 |
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Now this is delicious William, but a foot massage make for a lovely evening with me...
peace and love, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
6/19/2009 |
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| :) Very cute and sure to put a smile on the face of a lady :) |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
6/18/2009 |
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| Very, very sexy write! |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
6/17/2009 |
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| cute, sweet, sexy... |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
6/17/2009 |
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| I smile with thoughts knowing how wonderful this is! :)~ |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/17/2009 |
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| A toe fetish is alright with me, but I like the ending too. It is a simply great piece of writing. Mainly exspressive and well flowing in style. |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
6/17/2009 |
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"Ten in All" has such rhythm to it that you move to the beat quite easily.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/17/2009 |
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| mmmm delicious William, this is truly beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
6/17/2009 |
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| Oh my, a toe kisser, you romantic you. So lustfully French DArtagnan!! |
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| Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) |
6/17/2009 |
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| Oh I do like this one indeed....very sweet, love Holly |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/17/2009 |
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| oooh--very sexy! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/17/2009 |
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Delightful, William; enjoyed~ Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/17/2009 |
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| Very nice!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
6/17/2009 |
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| Well written ! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/17/2009 |
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The sweet childish playfulness of this sensual treat shines through the way love can be at times. It is funny for as a prelude to lovng they may seem corny and silly but...they are often memories we treasure the most.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/17/2009 |
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A mathematical trip around love, lust and...drinking champagne from one of her crystal shoes?
Musketeer, Versailles will not be the same anymore!
Georg
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
6/16/2009 |
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Delicious, William!
Lin |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
6/16/2009 |
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I can relate to this poem as my wife loves to paint her toes.
And red is her favorite. . . .
Enjoyed.
Doug |
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