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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/18/2009 |
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I know these feelings well, William. Powerful and compelling are your verses. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by C. Stone |
7/15/2009 |
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| A song filled with emotions and longing. A beautiful write! |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/8/2009 |
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| POETRY...LOVELY POETRY. NESTLED IN A FRAMEWORK OF A PERFECT STYLE ARE PHRASES THAT DRAW A PICTURE OF ONE BEMOANING A LOST LOVE. DONE WITH VIVID IMAGES AND RHYME, THIS IS A WELL WRITTEN WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING, BLESSINGS. JOYCE |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
6/30/2009 |
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This is excellent,great work,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/30/2009 |
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I like the forest simile, William. So sad this one is. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Johanna Fields |
6/27/2009 |
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| A sad poem, William Ive been there Hugs,Johanna |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
6/27/2009 |
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My heart is saddened to know of a love withering within the empty longing of an embrace to fufill the endearing dreams still living inside the broken heart of love's soul
Much Love & Inspirations William
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
6/26/2009 |
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| nice romantic verse William, hope the phone rings for you, of course just joking, cheers or ears fpo |
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| Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) |
6/25/2009 |
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| An exceptional poem William, Holly |
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| Reviewed by Debra Bateman |
6/23/2009 |
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Wow, this is so beautiful!
I could feel the passion, love and sadness.
My favorite part was:
"Within sapphire eyes I can see
My reflection"
Thanks for sharing.
-Debra : )
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
6/23/2009 |
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| this is truly melting, William. Such a painful scenario you paint here, such tender desperation and despair in the voice. Hopefully the Goddess will turn to liquid fire on receipt of your prayers at her altar! What pure joy to be so much loved. :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
6/22/2009 |
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You write with such sadness and longing in this beautiful poem, William...
peace and love, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
6/22/2009 |
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| :( How sad! I hope your Goddess realizes how much you love her :) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/22/2009 |
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| so sad and full of loss-well expressed |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/22/2009 |
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| So very sad, D'Artagnan. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/21/2009 |
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| ..sadness, yet such deep compassion for that Golden Goddess. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/21/2009 |
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William as always, romantic and beautiful from a true passionate man!
Much love, light, and peace,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/21/2009 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!! VERY ROMANTIC, VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/21/2009 |
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Silence after the train is gone, the only thing to do to relieve the pain is to wait for the next one with renewed hopes.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
6/21/2009 |
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| Such longing is this... |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
6/20/2009 |
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| Such silence would be painful. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/20/2009 |
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Sadness in these lines of longing, William, very well penned -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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