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  A Breeze
by William Bonilla
Saturday, June 27, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.

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A gentle Breeze

Rode on the wings

Of a wayward wind

Crossed my path

Engulfed me

Cooled, refreshed me

As I walked

On a hot summer day

continuing on its destination

Hitching a ride

On a lost wild wind

To meet the beginning

Of its infinity.



By: William Bonilla



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Reviewed by Inspire Hope 9/8/2009
Excellent write William!!!

P.S. Continue to write!
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 7/26/2009
Beautiful write....I felt as though I were floating on that breeze. Very well crafted poem.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/18/2009
I also find the wind (and its many personalities) to be a source of inspiration. Thank you for sharing this gift, William. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 7/11/2009
Nothing like a good cool breeze William, just before I read your cool poem I stepped outside on the porch to catch the cool peaceful morning breeze before the day gets hot, good one, cheers
Reviewed by Mary Grace Patterson 7/10/2009
Beautiful and touching. The winds currents are every where...M
Reviewed by JMS Bell 7/8/2009
Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) 7/7/2009
William, you have excelled with this one...just beautiful, Holly
Reviewed by Mary Coe 7/4/2009
Loved it. An excellent write.
Reviewed by Morning Star 7/4/2009
Ah William a very beautiful and cooling breeze
Your words captured such beautiful vividness
I could almost feel that breeze!
William I am so happy to be able to visit and read
at list today and maybe tomorrow YEAH!!!
Wishing you a safe and Happy 4TH
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 7/1/2009
Ahhhh. That cool breeze you created was just the ticket! In the 90's here in Chapel Hill, North Carolina. . .and anyway, who doesn't need to ride a lost wild wind? To infinity, yet! This is lovely, William. Thank you so much for posting it. <3 'Pea' <3
Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath 6/30/2009

William enjoyed your cool "...Breeze"
Thank you for sharing.

All the best and take care

Reviewed by A PAX 6/30/2009
gorgeous write
Reviewed by Michelle Mead 6/30/2009
I like how tightly this is written, no extra words to belabor the meaning, nice work, William.
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 6/30/2009
Love This Poem William!...coming full circle & Being Embraced or maybe in this case caressed by Mother Nature's Breadth!
Love & Inspirations
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 6/30/2009
Excellent poem,I enjoy reading it,take care

Reviewed by Sheila Roy 6/30/2009
Soothing descriptions. I especially like the use of "wild", because it highlights freedom. Hugs,
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 6/29/2009
Being touched and cooled by a stray breeze on a hot and muggy day is a special gift, William...lovely the way you expressed this moment!
peace and love, Carole~
Reviewed by L. Figgins 6/28/2009
Love this. Especially the last four lines! When I was a young child, I thought that I could direct the wind by waving my hands. This invisible force was so magical to me. Your poem reminded me of that. Beautiful. Thank you, William...

Reviewed by K. Mulroney 6/28/2009
To meet the beginning of it's infinity. Wow, what a verse that is. This was very well done!
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 6/28/2009
A gentle breeze are for flying small kites with smiles on it and tell God that one appreciate His gentle blowing on our faces.


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 6/28/2009
A beautiful piece of heaven...
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 6/27/2009
I can hear, smell and feel that Cool Breeze of a hot summer day. Nice poem, William, I am glad to see you back, alive and kicking!
Much peace, love, and light, my dearest friend,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by jude forese 6/27/2009
no better place to catch a breeze than at the beginning of infinity ...
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 6/27/2009
i like this! well done!
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 6/27/2009
A breezy read that cools while it invigorates...ed
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 6/27/2009
You make it impossible for us not to read your words William. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Johanna Fields 6/27/2009
William,You have a way with words your poem is lovely.I enjoyed reading. Hugs, Johanna
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 6/27/2009
We could use some of that breeze here; it's 102 outside; feels more like 201 degrees! Bleahh, it's HAWWWWWWWWWWWWT here in Texas! Great write, William; well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Hell (Ah, er, TEXAS!), Karen Lynn. :p *sweating*
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 6/27/2009
....and that is the way the wind blows...wonderful write William...felt a breeze from here.
Love and Blessings,
Reviewed by Lori Moore 6/27/2009
Wonderful images.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/27/2009
William, that is quite a wind, may
the thermals be smooth for you as
you journey afar!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva 6/27/2009
Beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by George Carroll 6/27/2009
Having done its job it continues on its way.
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