|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|Excellent write William!!!
P.S. Continue to write!
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Beautiful write....I felt as though I were floating on that breeze. Very well crafted poem.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I also find the wind (and its many personalities) to be a source of inspiration. Thank you for sharing this gift, William. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Nothing like a good cool breeze William, just before I read your cool poem I stepped outside on the porch to catch the cool peaceful morning breeze before the day gets hot, good one, cheers|
|Reviewed by Mary Grace Patterson
|Beautiful and touching. The winds currents are every where...M|
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|...AND NO MAN KNOWS WHERE THE WIND LISTETH...A WONDERFUL WRITE. GREAT PHRASES AND IMAGERY. GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE|
|Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
|William, you have excelled with this one...just beautiful, Holly|
|Reviewed by Mary Coe
|Loved it. An excellent write.|
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Ah William a very beautiful and cooling breeze
Your words captured such beautiful vividness
I could almost feel that breeze!
William I am so happy to be able to visit and read
at list today and maybe tomorrow YEAH!!!
Wishing you a safe and Happy 4TH
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Ahhhh. That cool breeze you created was just the ticket! In the 90's here in Chapel Hill, North Carolina. . .and anyway, who doesn't need to ride a lost wild wind? To infinity, yet! This is lovely, William. Thank you so much for posting it. <3 'Pea' <3|
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
William enjoyed your cool "...Breeze"
Thank you for sharing.
All the best and take care
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|I like how tightly this is written, no extra words to belabor the meaning, nice work, William.|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Love This Poem William!...coming full circle & Being Embraced or maybe in this case caressed by Mother Nature's Breadth!
Love & Inspirations
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|Excellent poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Soothing descriptions. I especially like the use of "wild", because it highlights freedom. Hugs,
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Being touched and cooled by a stray breeze on a hot and muggy day is a special gift, William...lovely the way you expressed this moment!
peace and love, Carole~
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Love this. Especially the last four lines! When I was a young child, I thought that I could direct the wind by waving my hands. This invisible force was so magical to me. Your poem reminded me of that. Beautiful. Thank you, William...
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|To meet the beginning of it's infinity. Wow, what a verse that is. This was very well done!|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|A gentle breeze are for flying small kites with smiles on it and tell God that one appreciate His gentle blowing on our faces.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|A beautiful piece of heaven...|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|I can hear, smell and feel that Cool Breeze of a hot summer day. Nice poem, William, I am glad to see you back, alive and kicking!
Much peace, love, and light, my dearest friend,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|no better place to catch a breeze than at the beginning of infinity ...|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|i like this! well done!|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|A breezy read that cools while it invigorates...ed|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|You make it impossible for us not to read your words William. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Johanna Fields
|William,You have a way with words your poem is lovely.I enjoyed reading. Hugs, Johanna|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|We could use some of that breeze here; it's 102 outside; feels more like 201 degrees! Bleahh, it's HAWWWWWWWWWWWWT here in Texas! Great write, William; well penned! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Hell (Ah, er, TEXAS!), Karen Lynn. :p *sweating*
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|....and that is the way the wind blows...wonderful write William...felt a breeze from here.
Love and Blessings,
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|William, that is quite a wind, may
the thermals be smooth for you as
you journey afar!
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|Beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Having done its job it continues on its way.|