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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
9/8/2009 |
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Excellent write William!!!
Blessings
P.S. Continue to write! |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/26/2009 |
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Beautiful write....I felt as though I were floating on that breeze. Very well crafted poem.
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/18/2009 |
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I also find the wind (and its many personalities) to be a source of inspiration. Thank you for sharing this gift, William. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by E S |
7/12/2009 |
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| A good poem. |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
7/11/2009 |
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| Nothing like a good cool breeze William, just before I read your cool poem I stepped outside on the porch to catch the cool peaceful morning breeze before the day gets hot, good one, cheers |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
7/10/2009 |
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| Beautiful and touching. The winds currents are every where...M |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/8/2009 |
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| ...AND NO MAN KNOWS WHERE THE WIND LISTETH...A WONDERFUL WRITE. GREAT PHRASES AND IMAGERY. GOD BLESS AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE |
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| Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) |
7/7/2009 |
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| William, you have excelled with this one...just beautiful, Holly |
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| Reviewed by Mary Coe |
7/4/2009 |
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| Loved it. An excellent write. |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
7/4/2009 |
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Ah William a very beautiful and cooling breeze
Your words captured such beautiful vividness
I could almost feel that breeze!
William I am so happy to be able to visit and read
at list today and maybe tomorrow YEAH!!!
Wishing you a safe and Happy 4TH
Yolie
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
7/1/2009 |
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| Ahhhh. That cool breeze you created was just the ticket! In the 90's here in Chapel Hill, North Carolina. . .and anyway, who doesn't need to ride a lost wild wind? To infinity, yet! This is lovely, William. Thank you so much for posting it. <3 'Pea' <3 |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
6/30/2009 |
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William enjoyed your cool "...Breeze"
Thank you for sharing.
All the best and take care
SEMPER FI'
~Gwendolyn
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
6/30/2009 |
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| gorgeous write |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
6/30/2009 |
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| I like how tightly this is written, no extra words to belabor the meaning, nice work, William. |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
6/30/2009 |
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Love This Poem William!...coming full circle & Being Embraced or maybe in this case caressed by Mother Nature's Breadth!
Love & Inspirations
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
6/30/2009 |
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Excellent poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/30/2009 |
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Soothing descriptions. I especially like the use of "wild", because it highlights freedom. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
6/29/2009 |
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Being touched and cooled by a stray breeze on a hot and muggy day is a special gift, William...lovely the way you expressed this moment!
peace and love, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
6/28/2009 |
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Love this. Especially the last four lines! When I was a young child, I thought that I could direct the wind by waving my hands. This invisible force was so magical to me. Your poem reminded me of that. Beautiful. Thank you, William...
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
6/28/2009 |
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| To meet the beginning of it's infinity. Wow, what a verse that is. This was very well done! |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/28/2009 |
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A gentle breeze are for flying small kites with smiles on it and tell God that one appreciate His gentle blowing on our faces.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
6/28/2009 |
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| A beautiful piece of heaven... |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/27/2009 |
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I can hear, smell and feel that Cool Breeze of a hot summer day. Nice poem, William, I am glad to see you back, alive and kicking!
Much peace, love, and light, my dearest friend,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/27/2009 |
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| no better place to catch a breeze than at the beginning of infinity ... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/27/2009 |
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| i like this! well done! |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/27/2009 |
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| A breezy read that cools while it invigorates...ed |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
6/27/2009 |
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You make it impossible for us not to read your words William. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Johanna Fields |
6/27/2009 |
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| William,You have a way with words your poem is lovely.I enjoyed reading. Hugs, Johanna |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/27/2009 |
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We could use some of that breeze here; it's 102 outside; feels more like 201 degrees! Bleahh, it's HAWWWWWWWWWWWWT here in Texas! Great write, William; well penned! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Hell (Ah, er, TEXAS!), Karen Lynn. :p *sweating* |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
6/27/2009 |
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....and that is the way the wind blows...wonderful write William...felt a breeze from here.
Love and Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
6/27/2009 |
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| Wonderful images. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/27/2009 |
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William, that is quite a wind, may
the thermals be smooth for you as
you journey afar!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
6/27/2009 |
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| Beautiful poem!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/27/2009 |
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| Having done its job it continues on its way. |
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