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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
8/13/2009 |
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'Tho beautiful, there is a sadness to your words, William, that I can't quite comprehend; an emptiness in those beautiful brown eyes. Keep loving, dear friend, as those moments shall, hopefully, pass.
Blessings and Love - Micke |
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| Reviewed by Debra Bateman |
8/1/2009 |
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| Truly beautiful William, thanks for sharing. : ) |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
7/31/2009 |
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William I have brown eyes, oh I guess this wasn't written for me but it is as Christine says breath-taking. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
7/29/2009 |
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| oh my....breath-taking! |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
7/28/2009 |
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This is how a woman likes to be loved - as though she is the only woman in the world. Lovely writing:)
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
7/26/2009 |
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| Sweet William! This should kindle fire and fan the flame of desire! This should put the hunger back in her brown eyes! HUGS! SC |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
7/26/2009 |
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| Beautiful wriitng sweet man as always..I love your heart it shines..sighhhh...Hugss,much love to you.. |
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| Reviewed by Johanna Fields |
7/24/2009 |
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| A sad but lovely poem and great writting. William,hugs Johanna |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
7/23/2009 |
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| William your poem touches ones soul. Its tender, romantic, and filled with sadness of lost love.....M |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
7/22/2009 |
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| William....you have grown so much as a poet my friend...this one is a keeper for sure....written with much depth and passion....you are a joy to read my friend....its time to come out with a major poetry book my friend....Let the whole world read your poems....scatter them in the form of books or whatsoever, please....BHUWAN!!! |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
7/21/2009 |
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Wow, beautifully penned indeed, held me captive with each word...great write from the depths of the heart. Enjoyed!
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
7/21/2009 |
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| Beautifully penned William, what a fine romance poet you are. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
7/19/2009 |
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D’Artagnan has emerged from his hiatus Thank you for this wonderfully romantic poem. I feel that I may have a bit of competition here, ummm, who is this brown eyed beauty that has you mesmerized?
Time to collaborate again my dear friend, your poem inspires the romantic in me.
As always a true romantic write from the best romantic poet!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/19/2009 |
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One word....WOW!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
7/18/2009 |
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| Another beauty. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/18/2009 |
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| lovely love poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/18/2009 |
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For me, it is green eyes but I can completely relate, William. A most compelling poem. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
7/18/2009 |
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So poignant and sad, William but beautifully written...
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/18/2009 |
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William, this is a fantastic love poem with some truly exquisite
lines especially 4th and last verses. Kudo's!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader) |
7/18/2009 |
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| Brown eyes, I'm a sucker for brown eyes. Steve |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
7/18/2009 |
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| sad but lovely! |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
7/18/2009 |
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Beautiful write, William, love and loneliness are strange bedfellows. Well done.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/18/2009 |
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I ALWAYS KNOW WHEN I READ YOUR WORK THAT I'M GOING TO BE TAKEN ON A LOVELY JOURNEY OF LOVE AND DESIRE THAT TOUCHES OUR CREATOR'S HEART. ENJOYED AND WELL WRITTEN AND THANKS FOR SHARING. BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
7/18/2009 |
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Oh brown silent eyes that don't look my brother anymore! Oh lips with no longer his name...love was busy working on my brother's heart and forgot hers.
Monsieur de Romantique I suppose?
Georg
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
7/18/2009 |
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| Passionate and distraught in equal measure, William, and I especially love that third stanza, which, with that little word "blur", for me gives the impression of the blinding mental fog of pain and confusion this poem conjures... blinded, except for, of course, those beautiful brown eyes.... Love-wrung and wrought to the uttermost. xx |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
7/18/2009 |
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| A most romantic love poem spoken with an adoring heart. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/18/2009 |
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| Still the king of the romantic write & keep those hot breezes down there, just send us some warmer water temps...e |
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