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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/17/2009 |
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| Wow,, Steamy with wanton desire, till I got to the end! What a surprise!...M |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/19/2009 |
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| A LITTLE DREAMING...A LITTLE REALITY....ALL MAKES FOR A GOOD DAY'S END. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WELL WRITTEN WORK...DONE WITH GREAT IMAGERY. GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
8/18/2009 |
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| Sweet William! Most time a fantasy is better than reality. I am tickled that your fantasies are gettin your creative juices flowin , Poetry Man. SC |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
8/8/2009 |
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an engaging write, indeed.
well done, mr. bubbles!
and, yes, do mind all those soggy pages ;-)
carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
8/7/2009 |
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Hotly sensual. We all have these day-dreaming moments. You paint the moment with serene images along the way. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
8/4/2009 |
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| ... Emb-Ar, you mean??!!!! :)) LOL... Sounds like you were well and truly emb-almed to me, William... This certainly wasn't one hot-tub that was becalmed while rocked by two! Great word-play here... as well as foreplay. Now, about those soggy pages...!!! xxx |
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| Reviewed by Johanna Fields |
8/4/2009 |
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| William,Oh my!!! what a beautiful poem dear friend Hugs Johanna |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
8/4/2009 |
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Well done!
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
8/4/2009 |
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What a lovely way to spend a steamy evening, William...WOW!
peace and love, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
8/4/2009 |
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| LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
8/4/2009 |
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The Professor from the University of Hard Knocks has misspelled the name of our mystical Universal traveler, perhaps it will be corrected in another lifetime?
Day's end where another begins...
Georg
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
8/4/2009 |
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| WOW!!! Enough said! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
8/3/2009 |
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| wow--very lovely! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
8/3/2009 |
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| ...what a way to end the day.....:) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/3/2009 |
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Striking piccy and beautiful poem, William; very nice! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
8/3/2009 |
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| Beautifully honest and sensual William. |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
8/3/2009 |
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A 12-etter word meaning superb...s-a-t-i-s-f-a-c-t-i-o-n Yep...D'Artagnan at work here! Methinks it time for a cold shower...since can't get into or out of a tub anymore, anyway :o)
Blessings and Love - Micke
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/3/2009 |
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| Wish I had a hot tub but too old for such hectic activity I think. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
8/3/2009 |
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William, I am flattered and blown away and I love this! Wow makes me want to get on a plane and join you...lol But..what would your lovely wife say, ohhhh, I love ya anyway..
What a hot (tub) poem..Makes one get all excited and needing some sexual healing. Now how long of a flight is it anyway? You are my special angel, William and I love it when you are a devil...Nice one,
ummmmm, makes me feel like writing a response to this, perhaps I will do that tonight,
See ya later!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/3/2009 |
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Clever, clever you - wish *my* name was Amber! LOL She's going to love this, as do I - well done, William!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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