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| Reviewed by john salmon |
10/21/2009 |
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| Very well written poem, expressed perfectly. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
9/11/2009 |
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Great contrasts in this poem, William. Details are vivid. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
9/9/2009 |
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| Wonderful images in this solitary , uplifing poem! What an unusual concept, of angels playing chess by a grave site! Great poem!...M |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
9/7/2009 |
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Your dreams are very visual and quite profound William, a well written poem...
peace and love, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
9/4/2009 |
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Such deep dreams you have, William! Have you been reading Poe, lately?
Dark-haired angel...evil? Golden haired angel...good? May the Golden-haired one win the chess game, and remove the headstone for much later use...
Interesting, poetic dream...my interpretation...
Blessings and Love - Micke |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
9/3/2009 |
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| Checkmate! Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
9/3/2009 |
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Good always wins over evil! and I am so glad that you are here and will fulfil your purpose, for the Lord is with you! very powerful vision, and well penned, I had to read it twice! " The Chess Game " William! with the Lord on your side you are the winner! Thanks for sharing!!!
Blessings!! |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/3/2009 |
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| Wow what a dream William..moving indeed! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
9/3/2009 |
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| A profound and thought provoking dream, beautifully penned William. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
9/3/2009 |
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One incredible dream William, you are not ready to play chess just yet!
Too many stories and poetry left in your heart...
Beautiful poem, captures a plane of existence that only a true poet can exist in.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
9/3/2009 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
9/3/2009 |
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USMC's will have dreams...never nightmares, and next time I play chess with the Big Boss I will ask Him why those angels were distracted playing chess instead of showing you the special place that Marines have in Heaven. And, my brother, that lone piper will never had a somber face when playing Amazing Grace for you.
May your heart get eternal peace among your brothers in Arlington.
Amazing!
Georg
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
9/2/2009 |
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| fascinating! |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
9/2/2009 |
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IS THIS FOR REAL WILLIAM....? IF IT IS, I WOULD THINK IT TO BE PRETTY SIGNIFICANT IN THAT WE KNOW THERE IS A CONTINUOUS 'WAR' GOING ON BETWEEN GOOD AND EVIL WITHIN US AND GOD HAS GIVEN US A 'FREE WILL' TO CHOOSE WHICH SIDE WE WANT TO FOLLOW. THIS A VERY WELL DONE WORK. ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
9/2/2009 |
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What a dream William, that is something like I would have. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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