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| Reviewed by Denise Edwards |
1/22/2011 |
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| Wow, William, the anticipation is so real! Charming write! |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
1/15/2011 |
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The anticipation nearly made me pop. Great job, William. Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Z McClure |
1/14/2011 |
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an awesome, wonderful description of the creative urge within every writer! There is more to this poem than meets the eye. ~Z.B.McClure
lovely personification |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
1/11/2011 |
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| Very creative...it is the images that grasp us and take us into that escape...we are as weak as we are strong and yet it is all a realistic fantasy that we play with...even within our minds.... |
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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
1/10/2011 |
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| How wonderfully expressive and artfully painted, this lust for what exists beyond the screen and keys! |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
1/10/2011 |
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This is sensuous beautiful expression, William,
and sensitive and knowing, too.
First rate!
John |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
1/10/2011 |
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Powerfully sensuous write, William! Burning desire building with every phrase......hot stuff! Love romantic poetry......and yours is awesome! Beautifully done!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
1/10/2011 |
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| YES...THAT'S ME DOWN THERE, WILLIAM...FORGOT TO LOG IN. I SEE THAT I AM THE ONLY ONE THAT CAME FROM THIS POINT OF VIEW...SO...LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT MY INTERPRETATION OF THIS WORK. GOD BLESS YOU. LOVE AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
1/10/2011 |
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| ...YOU HAVE DARED, WILLIAM AND AS ALWAYS...THE PROFOUND COMPELLING BEAUTY OF POETRY'S SENSUOUS PRESENCE, WHICH YOU DESCRIBE SO ARTISTICALLY, AS A VISION OF A WOMAN...CAN ONLY BE SEEN, INTERPRETED AND APPRECIATED BY ANOTHER...WHO HAS BEHELD POETRY'S LOVELY MYSTERIES ALSO. SHE...THE GIFT OF POETRY... WILL NEVER LET US REST...AND I AM SO GRATEFUL TO HIM WHO GAVE HER TO US...AREN'T YOU? I LOVE THIS METAPHORIC WORK...! THIS IS A METAPHORE...IS IT NOT? OR...WERE YOU SLIPPING INTO ONE OF YOUR RICH 'FANTASIES', WHICH YOU SO SO WELL? AH, BE IT AS IT IS...WHICH EVER IT IS...A 'DIFFERENT' PERSPECTIVE IS ALWAYS...INTERESTING? THANKS FOR SHARING THIS KEEPER. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH....JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
1/9/2011 |
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Another beauty from your golden quill, William. Always the hopeful romantic, you are.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
1/9/2011 |
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I love it William when that silver tongued D'artagnan uses your pen to creat beautiful, romantic poetry!
peace and love, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
1/9/2011 |
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You have dared to face the indescribable and succeeded,, once again.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
1/9/2011 |
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| What's the difference between fantasy and reality, I wonder, where all the contact we have with the object of our intense affection is what we are able to receive and perceive through an "inanimate" screen? Yet it's skin's so real, no?! :)) So well-written my own knees are knocking here, William! May love and wisdom always be your guide. xx |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
1/9/2011 |
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William, breathtaking as always, you know how to pour your heart out. Yes always, you should dare, what do we have but this moment to live out our fantasies...
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
1/9/2011 |
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This is awesome! It is so authentic and fascinating to read. And Vickie is right about all she said about it, too.
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
1/9/2011 |
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This is so very sensuous too William
what woman wouldn't want to know they have
this effect on a man...so sultry are your words
and the arousal of feelings...
Love's Bounty & Moments
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
1/9/2011 |
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| VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Ragno Donna |
1/8/2011 |
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I love the slow burn of this poem. You have it bad don't you.
Nice one!
Ciao,
Ragno |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
1/8/2011 |
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| William, This is fantastic. It's like you are speaking to all poets. I have to believe that anyone who has ever labored over a loving poem to their sweetheart has lived these same words. Most of us don't express them nearly so well, but we've sat before that blank screen, with deafening silence surrounding us, uncreated poetry and unborn words. I can't speak for anyone else, but I have also experienced that stirring within my loins as I toiled seeking the exact words to express myself. This is absolutely marvelous. Thank You, Dick |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
1/8/2011 |
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This was a pure lovers piece, William. And an excellent one to boot.
Peace and Love
Tony |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/8/2011 |
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Excellant write capturing feelings and emotions that most of us have felt before and can truly relate to...
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
1/8/2011 |
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The pangs of love do that to a man and who can withstand a beautiful come hither smile and not be left with expectations of maybe to night I'll get lucky.
George |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
1/8/2011 |
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| beautiful! |
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