|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|A sad and haunting feel to this beautiful poem, William.
love and hugs, Carole~
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|A classic feel to this poem, William. I wonder if we all don't end up this way, having lost, but risked it. We all have that one that got away, or worse, a situation more tragic. Love and hugs,
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Sad and beautiful. From the mists of time ,, memories remain...M|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Sad but hauntingly beautiful, William! Guess we've all been there at least once in our lifetime.....
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|William, this is so beautifully touching but oh so sad. Remember we all only go this way once, so one must make the best of it.
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|THANK GOD THE MEMORIES ARE OF 'LAUGHTER'... BITTER AND SWEET...A ENJOYABLE MIXTURE THAT IS APPRECIATED...IN MELENCHOLY TIMES. LOVELY WORK, WILLIAM...THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Beautiful writing sweet man...Hugsss|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Sometimes, all you need is the laughter, the rest is just fodder for the soul. Well done William, well done.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Beautiful poem, William! Bittersweet...
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|A bitter sweet way to look at life but expressed with honesty and truth, not sure if this is your personal experience but if so I know you will find a new song and add the old to the songbook of your heart.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I relate to this, Bill...more than I can express...e|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|William, lost love recaptured perhaps
in these painful lines. -gene.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
i think love is still there, too,
even if it's unfilfilled; there's such
longing and tenderness of expression
in these lines.
Very fine indeed.
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Only the laughter lasts? Love never wanes.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
Indeed, it is part of the human condition. Many go wrong by making adverse choices when they're down or their partner is...
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|These feelings come and go in life...part of our human condition...beautifully and evocatively expressed...
Best wishes, Diana...
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|d'Artagnan, such a loss can bring sadness again and again...I can empathize.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|I know we have felt this along our life trails William.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This is a sadly common theme in this life/world, William. I am sure many can relate. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Bitter sweet memories|