|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|Passion so sweet, so intense. Your words set fire to the pages you write upon. All of a sudden... it seems very warm in my computer room!
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Now that is what dream are made of...beautiful and steamy William.
peace and love, Carole~
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Big dreamy sigh. Thank you, William, for this sensuous piece of writing.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Wonderful sweet passion in this one!
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Outstanding writing, William.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Wow to those silent lips William.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Donna Chandler
|Sensual, loving and exciting.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|My goodness William..this is simply beutiful..possessing such freshness and purity.
Love and Blessings,
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Leaves one passionately breathless! Well done, William...
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Now that's the way to go, William,
and the way to speak;
a perfect blend of romance, passion and completion.
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|YOUR PHRASES PRODUCE IMAGERY THAT IS VIVID IN THIS PASSIONATE WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Seems like father's day wasn't a complete bust. Ha ha|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Sounds to me that you found some happiness for a moment anyway!!!!!
Happy Father's Day my special friend..
love and peace,
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Now we know how you spent Fathers Day...quite intoxicating.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing this passionate offering, William. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Wellllllllll, now I need a cold shower or a visit from my Rene...;-)e|