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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/21/2011 |
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There are some that one ought never to erase and in fact, I have found that they cannot be erased. Thank you, William. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
10/18/2011 |
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OHHH,WILLIAM...DO NOT ERASE HER...EVER.
a VERY ROMANTIC POEM WHICH I ENJOYED READING.
lOVE FROM
KAY...(excuse capitals too lazy to rewrite it...awesome poem Bill.) |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
9/16/2011 |
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URGH, I felt like I was closing the last page in a delicate book of LIFE here William!
What an endearing sweet loving poem!! That INSPIRATION that keeps your imagination strong and powerful, is enlightening! KEEP IT CLOSE! EMBRACE it (not too tight) and Love it sweetly!
WRITE ON!
Allow her closer and your writing will wisp away to dimensions beyond your control (What a Beautiful thought Huh)? :)
Sweet Sexy SHEE ox |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/17/2011 |
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I THINK WE CAN NEVER 'ERASE' OUR INSPIRATION...IT HAS ALWAYS BEEN THERE AND ALWAYS WILL BE THERE...ETERNALLY. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
8/16/2011 |
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| Thinking deeply about the unthinkable can be a lonely and scary place, William. We only consider erasing that which is no longer valid, but if the "original" still persists, then the space created will soon again be filled... Poignant and beautifully expressed. xx |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
8/16/2011 |
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I loved Jude's comment. Never let her go, always keep her close, don't rock the boat.
Much peace, love and peace,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
8/15/2011 |
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Beautiful heartfelt poem William!
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
8/15/2011 |
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Never let her go, William.......
Anna |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/15/2011 |
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| always keep such things stored in your external hard drive ;) |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
8/15/2011 |
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Such a beautiful poem of love enduring and I hope not to be erased!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Ragno Donna |
8/14/2011 |
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Then don't! Go for it, William, don't let her go.
Ragno |
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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
8/14/2011 |
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You will not do so willingly. Well written with such affable apprehension.
Janna |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
8/14/2011 |
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those priceless memories can never be erased, william!
beautiful sentiments herein,
peace,
carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/14/2011 |
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Love may fade in time, we can even do things to try and keep our minds occupied, but our hearts never forget or allow us to erase.
fee |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
8/14/2011 |
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So don't erase her...its as simple as that...e
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
8/14/2011 |
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| How does one erase someone from their memories, a sad and poignant thought, everyone that has ever touched us will leave pieces behine that we have to make piece with. Much love and peace to you dear friend, Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/14/2011 |
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A deep sadness here, William,
the fear of loss obviously...
and the loneliness after.
Written with fine touch and sensitivity.
John |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/14/2011 |
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I have doubts it will come to that but you paint a bleak picture if it does. Nicely done
George |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
8/14/2011 |
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| I guess Erasers can be both good and bad. |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
8/14/2011 |
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| VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Glen Manese |
8/13/2011 |
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| You seem to reach a depth in the lines, yet leave room for a conclusion... as a reader clues in on the 3 stanzas... A sense of desperation, while contemplating reason within the issue... Thanks for sharing... |
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