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  If I Erase You
by William Bonilla
Saturday, August 13, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.

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"You Reside within my every thought"


 

If I Erase You
~~

If I erase you,
You are my original
What will I ever do
Without you in my mind?

In time I’ll lose you
From my side
From the warmth
Of your embrace
From the sensuousness
Of your heavenly scent
From every thing
I’ve ever dreamt about you.

The nectars
Of your sweet tongue
I’ll  taste not anymore
If I erase you
What will I ever do?

By: William Bonilla
“D’Artagnan”
07/13/2011

 




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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/21/2011
There are some that one ought never to erase and in fact, I have found that they cannot be erased. Thank you, William. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 10/18/2011
OHHH,WILLIAM...DO NOT ERASE HER...EVER.
a VERY ROMANTIC POEM WHICH I ENJOYED READING.
lOVE FROM
KAY...(excuse capitals too lazy to rewrite it...awesome poem Bill.)
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 9/16/2011
URGH, I felt like I was closing the last page in a delicate book of LIFE here William!
What an endearing sweet loving poem!! That INSPIRATION that keeps your imagination strong and powerful, is enlightening! KEEP IT CLOSE! EMBRACE it (not too tight) and Love it sweetly!

WRITE ON!
Allow her closer and your writing will wisp away to dimensions beyond your control (What a Beautiful thought Huh)? :)

Sweet Sexy SHEE ox
Reviewed by JMS Bell 8/17/2011
I THINK WE CAN NEVER 'ERASE' OUR INSPIRATION...IT HAS ALWAYS BEEN THERE AND ALWAYS WILL BE THERE...ETERNALLY. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 8/16/2011
Thinking deeply about the unthinkable can be a lonely and scary place, William. We only consider erasing that which is no longer valid, but if the "original" still persists, then the space created will soon again be filled... Poignant and beautifully expressed. xx
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 8/16/2011
I loved Jude's comment. Never let her go, always keep her close, don't rock the boat.

Much peace, love and peace,
Amber
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 8/15/2011
Beautiful heartfelt poem William!
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 8/15/2011
Never let her go, William.......


Anna
Reviewed by jude forese 8/15/2011
always keep such things stored in your external hard drive ;)
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 8/15/2011
Such a beautiful poem of love enduring and I hope not to be erased!
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Ragno Donna 8/14/2011
Then don't! Go for it, William, don't let her go.

Ragno
Reviewed by Janna Hill 8/14/2011
You will not do so willingly. Well written with such affable apprehension.
Janna
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 8/14/2011
those priceless memories can never be erased, william!
beautiful sentiments herein,
peace,
carolyn
Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/14/2011
Love may fade in time, we can even do things to try and keep our minds occupied, but our hearts never forget or allow us to erase.
fee
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 8/14/2011
So don't erase her...its as simple as that...e
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 8/14/2011
How does one erase someone from their memories, a sad and poignant thought, everyone that has ever touched us will leave pieces behine that we have to make piece with. Much love and peace to you dear friend, Carole~
Reviewed by John Flanagan 8/14/2011
A deep sadness here, William,
the fear of loss obviously...
and the loneliness after.
Written with fine touch and sensitivity.

John
Reviewed by George Carroll 8/14/2011
I have doubts it will come to that but you paint a bleak picture if it does. Nicely done

George
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/14/2011
I guess Erasers can be both good and bad.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 8/14/2011
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Glen Manese 8/13/2011
You seem to reach a depth in the lines, yet leave room for a conclusion... as a reader clues in on the 3 stanzas... A sense of desperation, while contemplating reason within the issue... Thanks for sharing...
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