|Reviewed by S Lyon
|Sounds like you miss her tremendously. This made me want to cry for I could feel the passion all encompassing in each line. A lovely poem through and through.|
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|Such exotic lines of passion and sadness caressing the page...
Heavenly writing William...
Best wishes, Diana...
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Beautifully written you capture such stunning longings
and images truly sensual and romantic WOW Love It
Perfectly structured and the rhythmic flow is fantastic
William all i can say is WOW
Love Peace and light...Hugsss Yolie
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|WoW!!! You never lose your verve,William,or your great passion!
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|William is back!!! Another most beautiful romantic, sensual offerings..I missed you much. You haven't lost your touch!
Much peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Hi William! Your writing touches the passionate soul. Thank you for sharing... ;-)
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Sensually described wishes.
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Dusky and sensuous as only D'Artagnan's pen can create...splendid William
peace and love, Carole~
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
Passionate - yes, several others have used
the word - but it's so right here, and so is
beautiful..passionate and beautiful
feeling and writing.
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|Passionate and beautiful!|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Bruv, I'm with you all the way. I share the same madding pain.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Passionate, sensual, and compelling are your words here, William. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Excellant work my friend...
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Wow! Deeply moving with firey passion and yet a tragic sense of lonelines...love hurts! Well done, William!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Such a depth of sadness in this William....cravings should be satisfied some how~ (good to see you post)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Scent is a most powerful thing.|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|SENSUOUS AND ROMANTIC...THIS IS 'YOU', WILLIAM...SHARING WITH US, SO VIVIDLY, THE PLACES YOU GO AND THE THINGS YOU FEEL. WELL DONE AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS