AuthorsDen.com  Join Free! | Login 

 
   Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
Where Authors and Readers come together!

Signed Bookstore | Authors | eBooks | Books | Stories | Articles | Poetry | Blogs | News | Events | Reviews | Videos | Success | Gold Members | Testimonials

Featured Authors: Stephen Cafaro, iNordette Adams, iPeter Jessop, iA. Colin Wright, iD.E.Z. Butler, iTony Bertot, iDR FRED BELL, i
  Home > Action/Thriller > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

William Bonilla

  + Follow Me   

· 1,294 titles
· 18,302 Reviews
· Share with Friends!
· Save to My Library
·
Member Since: Nov, 2002

   Sitemap
   My Blog
   Contact Author
   Read Reviews


Short Stories
· A Journey To The Other Side

· The Shortest Story Ever Told

· Ambrosio (Fiction)

· Teddy The Horse

· The Unforgiving

· Have You Ever Seen A Ghost?

· Still Searching

· A Stain For Heroes


Poetry
· Seeking Compassion

· Dare I ?

· No Cardinal Sin

· From Above

· Dreams Of Desires

· We Don't Rub Swords

· And Than Came The Sunrise

· Remembering Bitterness

· Taste Of Ambrosia

· Ode To Champ

         More poetry...

William Bonilla, click here to update your web pages on AuthorsDen.

   
  The Gods Punishment
by William Bonilla
Wednesday, May 09, 2012
Rated "G" by the Author.

Share   Print   Save


Recent poems by William Bonilla
•  Seeking Compassion
•  Dare I ?
•  No Cardinal Sin
•  From Above
•  And Than Came The Sunrise
           >> View all 1,286



 

 

The Gods Punishment

~~~*~~~

There's a thought
of a glorious image
embe ded
deep in my mind
of you
As you blest my vision
the last time
I saw you watching me
walk away.


now the gods
punishes me
for I am unable
to create
A song , An ode, A sonnet
A word, A line, A verse.


They have punished me
by drying my inkwell
Relieving me
Of my quill
Castrating my ability
to create images
upon the virgin parchment
Before me.


By: William Bonilla
D'Artagnan
12/13/2011




Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!




Reviewed by JMS Bell 5/24/2012
HMMM...I DON'T KNOW, WILLIAM. NOT A TIME OF REST, CONTEMPLATION... REFILLING OR RENEWAL? BUT OF PUNISHMENT?!! WE MUSTN'T EVER FORGET; WE ARE 'HIS' INSTRUMENT, NOT THE OTHER WAY AROUND...WE HAVE TO WAIT. BUT I GUESS EACH POET LOOKS AT IT DIFFERENTLY, HOWEVER...I AM GLAD TO NOTE THAT IT WAS A WHILE AGO THAT YOU WROTE THIS AND I TODAY I READ 'SHE CONFESSED'. WELCOME BACK!!!!! LOVE YA! MANY BLESSINGS AND MUCH FAITH TO YOU AND YOURS.

JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 5/10/2012
Given time, I am sure ur image will be created & such an image it will be...maybe its the virgin part u r having trouble with...? ;-)e
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 5/10/2012
Your muse is gone? I don't think so, because this poem surely speaks to everyone. I see however, that you wrote it last year.

Let's do a collab soon. Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 5/10/2012
i know the feeling--i have felt the same after my sister's passing
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 5/10/2012
Judging by the way you penned this one, William, you're not being punished at all! Great writing!!!!

Anna
Reviewed by John Flanagan 5/10/2012
certainly an interesting way of
looking at it, William, and unusual, too.

i like it a lot

john
Popular Poetry (Action/Thriller)
  1.  Rain Senryu
  2.  Smile Today
  3.  Have I told you I LOVE YOU today?
  4.  The Razor and the Match
  5.  Womanhood
  6.  Body Quakes
  7.  Body by Joe
  8.  True Friends
  9.  Hope Reawakened
  10.  A Lovely Day For A Swim

Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us


Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.