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Short Stories
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· The Domino Effect

· Disciplined

· A Forbidden Word / Deviant lies

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  Wanting To Write
by William Bonilla
Sunday, February 16, 2003


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At times, I wish to write,
A poem,
To describe a scene,
Or, a feeling within.

I can't think of words,
To say,
Words, that would rhyme at least,
A few lines.

I need, to cross that barrier,
Into your mind,
To reach, your thoughts,
Hoping, you understand mine.

To describe, A rose, her perfume,
The morning drops, of dew,
To implant, those images, in your mind,
Is all, I wish to do.

Deep, into your mind,
As my poetry, you read,
I hope, you'll never forget them,
In due time.

By: William Bonilla.......6/18/02





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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/17/2003
lovely write ...and i will not forget okay!! :))
tinka
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 2/17/2003
You know I use to write poems that rhymed and then I gave it up. I think after reading so much, I discovered that the rhyme is in the heart, not the words.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 2/17/2003
Love this one, William, from the heart of a true poet.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 2/17/2003
William....very very wonderful write...BHUWAN
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 2/17/2003
A very insightful write William. I enjoyed it. Bill
Reviewed by jude forese 2/16/2003
a true poet is a living poem which reaches out into the world to move it... you have moved us well...
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 2/16/2003
William,
I agree with Erin, you have captured it!

Hugs,
Maria
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 2/16/2003
Yes, that is how if feels, aching to give your image to the reader. Nice write, William. :)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 2/16/2003
Well done.

Too many commas though. Poetry has less punctuation than prose, only enough to give the reader a clue as to where to pause. [I'm assuming from your poem that you are asking...???]

Space the last two lines differently, and you've got it.

"I hope you'll never forget them,
In due time. "

Kindest regards,
~E

~E

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