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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
10/8/2003 |
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| Beautifully soulful write, Adam...~Z~ |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
10/8/2003 |
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| A lovely poem and expression of longing. |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
10/7/2003 |
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This was so lovely and moving, I hope you find what you are looking for..
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
10/7/2003 |
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| Your heart does sing with this write. |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
10/6/2003 |
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You have, and shall create much beauty before you die.
The beauty in your words is so pure so real.
Always a pleasure Adam..ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman |
10/6/2003 |
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| Good form, you keep a prominent character in the work, and hold the craft well. Endearingly honest. |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
10/6/2003 |
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this is so beautiful.....i read it 4 times!!!
bravo!
A |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
10/5/2003 |
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This shall come forward in short time...for she does wait patiently. The desire to leave behind a grand and beautiful creation as our legacy is powerful.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
10/5/2003 |
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She waits patiently...
This one is like soul searching. Love this write!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/5/2003 |
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Adam this one is just very touching my friend!!
It brought tears to my eyes!!
I swear she is out there waiting....just look close enough!!
love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
10/5/2003 |
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| My sweet Adam.. Who you are is why you will be deeply loved in your life here.. she is looking too! Paths cross and criss/cross.. when you write simply and from your heart, as you've done here, you reach out to her and you will reach her in time. But it's who you are that she will answer... you have an irrisistible essence! I have always known that... believe it! love, mom/katy xox. |
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| Reviewed by Laura Via |
10/5/2003 |
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Sometimes, I think it's better to stay up there in the clouds and keep looking down. But, then after all, I have a jaded view. May one day that little bird spread its wings and join thee in the clouds hon! *hugz*
Cheers
Lorrha |
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| Reviewed by a- maryllis |
10/5/2003 |
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| awww... this is beautiful. keep up hope, there is a girl out there for you... you'll find her one day. :) |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
10/5/2003 |
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| Keep pushing forward Adam. I believe you have produced several things of beauty in your writing. These were words penned from your heart, they sang a song of honest chords. Lisa |
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