|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|"The Torch of Friendship" shall remain lighted to show the way to sincerity.
I have enjoyed this pleasing and beautiful writing.
Keep writing, Poet!
Happy Healthy Day!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|I like the concept of a friendship "marked by God's seal" - sometimes (but not too often) we're lucky enough to experience just that.
The metaphor is fine at the end, Adam. It's concise. There's nothing worse than buried, convuluted metaphor - your use is always clear and direct.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Exceptional write..I am with Dani too....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Laura Via
|Okay you've left me speechless ... tender write.
Love & Light
|Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
|I am going to agree with all here dont change a thing about this poem
the depth of feeling drips off the page and enters the readers soul
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
I agree with Dani, I wouldn't change a thing!
This is another soul touching poem from you,
every time I come to read you, your work gets
more and more intense! That is definitely a very good
thing! This stanza is beautiful in its sentiment:
"I wish she'd tell me more about him so
That he's not just some shadowy other
It would cure the infection perhaps to know
Around whose face her thoughts hover"
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Excellent poetry with a profound message Adam!!
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Adam this is so beautiful!!!!
And the last line, I think its great....but if you want to add the word "Our" before friendship.....it might balance more???
But actually I think its great as is!!!!!
this poem is very touching!
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
This is a beautiful poem..you’ve put much heart into these words.
Your rhyme is amazing…you just get better and better..and you were already fantastic.
I love the title…And I adore that third stanza..
Don’t change a thing..
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Hi Adam.. I have recently found that I learn more of you here than in seeing and talking with you.. this has some wonderfully positive 'notes' in it.. you are not often a rhymer, yet you do it so well.. I believe it was just right for this particular piece. Forgive the reference here but 'your heart will go on'.. it always does.. always has.. Look back for a minute.. you've overcome far more than you need to yet face. I wish only wonderfulness for you.. you know that! love, katy/your mom xox.|
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Im not new in here, been around for a while, but still it takes time to eke out other writers who take the cake :)
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|..rather well written..though it's a slightly different approach from your other work..ty
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Excellent poem, Adam! ~Z~|
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|This was an excellent poem and it is obvious that by writing it, it did indeed help close the wound.