|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Depthful and quite amazing....
I hear you...
|Reviewed by Jeffrey Lunder (Reader)
|Adam my heart goes out to you on your aunts, my cousins, passing. The new life you create with your words is absolutly wonderful.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Wow..I loved this, beautifully written,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This is thought provokingly insightful and it leaves one with hope. Well done!|
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|'The choice is clear. My plans are laid
I've reason for my next breath '
I wish I could say that and mean it..alas I would rather say
'Time to leave the flesh behind'
hmm..guess I'll have to stick around..:)
Thankyou Adam for a most insightful write..
beautifully written..you are a talented young man indeed....
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Deep inspiring write Adam!!
|Reviewed by a- maryllis
|"Do not go gentle into that good night
Rage, rage against the dying of the light"
- Dylan Thomas
|Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
|This has some similarities to my poem posted on the Authors' Den, "A Portal To Glory". I believe that everybody has to define his/ her own realities, based on her/ his own life experiences. I think there must be something more to existence, but I don't believe it behooves me to try to influence others to think the way I do. We certainly do not live in the best of all possible worlds.|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Potent and portentious, Adam, a fierce battle won, a lessening of strange pain and a reavowal to live. I'm glad. Gripping piece with hope yet gripped by death.|
|Reviewed by Laura Via
|This seems to echo my last attempt of delving into the great void of what I once saw as death. Of course, now thing seem so different, yet I still walk that thin line between this world and the desire to travel onto the next. Yet, is death really an end ... or just the beginning of a higher level of being? One of the many questions I contemplate. But, there is still a part of me that yearns for the release from this existence. Don't let go of the light yet ... it completments you well. Much hope within these words. *hugz*
Love & Light
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Deep and inspiring, Adam. I like the way you have written this.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)