|Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|What a creative view of passion's trap. I hope you are as contented as that cat!|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|My son has saved the amazing pic for screensaver! So I shall be equally felled and wobbly everytime I'm "hard at it!" This is a masterpiece, Susan, and touches ever spot imaginable in a delightful way - every twist and turn of this poem is bursting with surprise and arenalin: a real rush of the feel-good factor! I can really FEEL this: how is it that the chatter of the heart can be heard above all else at times and is quite unconcealable and all-consuming? And uncontrollable, too! This kind of connection with another is quite magical and all-too rare. You have conveyed a mystery in a magical and tangible way. TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Oh, boy. Southern-fried tree-filly. LOL|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Cute write. Love the ending.|
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|If you are tree'd Susan...you have reached the tallest part of that tree with this super great write. Excellently done.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|lots of energy!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Superb creation well-rhymed and rythmic as well. Tryly romantic. Thank you for this offering, Susan. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
you're not tree'd--you're on FIRE! whooo, passionate hot write!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
"...lips die for kisses..." WOW, wish i'd find a love like that :)...and wish i'd written it
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|You romantic You!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Whew girl! you're more than tree'd!;-)
Great glow of passion burning out of control!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Times are when spirits win a moondance
White knights in smiles take hold of chance
Would make a great kinda quote.
You sure won gold here..
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|Very romantic and passionate Susan...
|Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)
|Love the meter as this flows....great last line!
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|Ahhhh...Susan....you are the Tops when it comes to uniquely
phrased romantic poetry! I like your other ones, too, but when
you combine a touch of humor with your excellent scribing...you
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was excellent Susan, loved this one!
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Now that is a dog that knows how to hunt.|