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| Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick |
9/17/2004 |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/22/2004 |
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| What a creative view of passion's trap. I hope you are as contented as that cat! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
8/22/2004 |
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| My son has saved the amazing pic for screensaver! So I shall be equally felled and wobbly everytime I'm "hard at it!" This is a masterpiece, Susan, and touches ever spot imaginable in a delightful way - every twist and turn of this poem is bursting with surprise and arenalin: a real rush of the feel-good factor! I can really FEEL this: how is it that the chatter of the heart can be heard above all else at times and is quite unconcealable and all-consuming? And uncontrollable, too! This kind of connection with another is quite magical and all-too rare. You have conveyed a mystery in a magical and tangible way. TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
8/21/2004 |
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enjoyed much
excellent write
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
8/21/2004 |
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| Oh, boy. Southern-fried tree-filly. LOL |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
8/21/2004 |
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| Cute write. Love the ending. |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
8/20/2004 |
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If you are tree'd Susan...you have reached the tallest part of that tree with this super great write. Excellently done.
Allen |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/20/2004 |
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| lots of energy! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/20/2004 |
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| Superb creation well-rhymed and rythmic as well. Tryly romantic. Thank you for this offering, Susan. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/20/2004 |
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(((susan)))
you're not tree'd--you're on FIRE! whooo, passionate hot write!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
"...lips die for kisses..." WOW, wish i'd find a love like that :)...and wish i'd written it |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/20/2004 |
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You romantic You!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/20/2004 |
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Whew girl! you're more than tree'd!;-)
Great glow of passion burning out of control! |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
8/20/2004 |
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Times are when spirits win a moondance
White knights in smiles take hold of chance
Would make a great kinda quote.
You sure won gold here..
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
8/20/2004 |
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Very romantic and passionate Susan...
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader) |
8/20/2004 |
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Love the meter as this flows....great last line!
Amy |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
8/20/2004 |
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Ahhhh...Susan....you are the Tops when it comes to uniquely
phrased romantic poetry! I like your other ones, too, but when
you combine a touch of humor with your excellent scribing...you
excel bigtime! |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
8/20/2004 |
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This was excellent Susan, loved this one!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
8/20/2004 |
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| Now that is a dog that knows how to hunt. |
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