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Passion and Rain by Susan K. de Vegter Monday, April 10, 2006 Rated "PG13" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan

Passions & Rain Rain keeps coming from volumes of clouds It trickles and cools down my passions that pound Then just when I think I'm all calm and collected The thunder resounds and I'm feeling neglected. I need the rain and the touch of my man I crave the chill that warms with his hands My tingles go up and then all back down Just passion awakening... they push and then pound. Heavier the cadense merges with thunder Body's take refuge within one another The fired up reality ... it comes and then grows Keeps budding the nipples and curling my toes. The fever of flesh and the rosier tones They prick each nerve with a sigh... then a moan The whispers that breathe upon moistened skin When floodgates are opened and love rushes in It's the passion of storms that call upon lovers Who roll with the thunder and move under covers It's needing the pleasures that cadence with rain Kissing our sorrow and loosening our pains It's flirting with tender... provocative powers The hot love of you and me with showers It's rhythms much faster ... then kisses all over Its wet things that lick in places that hover Its hugging and bonding in lightning's rebound Its loving hot passions that don't touch the ground. When nature performs and passions do too It's me within love needing no one but you. � 2006 Susan K. de Vegter

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Reviewed by Peter Paton	4/11/2006

Wow Peter




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	4/11/2006

Passionately fine, Susan. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace, Regis




Reviewed by F William Broome	4/11/2006

An amazing acounting of nature - in the sky and on mortals' bed. I grope for words to go on... but you just said all needing to be said. - With envy - Bill




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)	4/11/2006

Hey! Susan! Don't hold back, here, let it all out, tell us exactly how you feel. LOL Loved this offering because . . . well, nevermind, I just did. You corraled all of the physical emotions and wrote them in this poem like they had been waiting, just waiting, for a chance to tell everyone how they felt. Takes talent to do this and keep it from sounding like a porno movie. Not to say that porn is ALL bad, did I ever tell you about . . . Better not go there. LOL2




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	4/11/2006

Wow, Susan, this one blew me away! Awesome writing, and that pic is amazing! BRAVA; very well penned! Saving this beauty! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	4/11/2006

Love the way you used nature here!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Felix Perry	4/11/2006

This is perfectly executed, and draws the reader in from the first line. The electicity and ozone can be smelled from the very pages as I read it and the passion arising from your loins must be intense for it to manifest itself so well into the written word. Very good Susan...and I love the rainy night. Felix




Reviewed by E T Waldron	4/10/2006

Fantastic Susan! I love the rhyme and rhythm!Has the limerick lilt, which you do so well... Love, Eileen




Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner	4/10/2006

Susan, This, my dear, is a StormSpinner's kind of write. I'll go even further, and give you my ultimate compliment: WISH I'D WRITTEN THIS SCORCHER!!!!!! Definately saving, beautifully written and felt; BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. I love the accompanying pic, too. A StormSpinner's kind. :) All around perfection!