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| Reviewed by Taylor Ryan |
6/26/2006 |
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Susan...this one grabbed me...even shook me up a bit when I realized how well you can just lay it on the line and speak your mind and your heart. Some of us are just too trusting and giving...users prey on the likes of us, leaving us woulded...abandoned...nut stronger. We can make the same mistakes again, or learn how to measure trust and be quite such alluring targets. Never sacrifice your sensitivity.
Hugs,
Taylor |
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| Reviewed by Aubrey Hammack |
6/18/2006 |
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| You are so honest in this poem. You have such a way of communicating your feelings. Even though I don't know you personally, I do know that you are an extremely sensitive person. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/18/2006 |
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Spells it out so well, this living hell.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/17/2006 |
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| excellent poem, Susan ... yes pain knows no gender ... it travels in all directions ... did you ever try reading this poem from bottom up? |
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| Reviewed by George Jackson |
6/17/2006 |
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| Have to agree with Felix here. Very honest, very real. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/17/2006 |
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Poignant and heart awakening to these thoughts that have so much meaning and express so much feelings. Well done Susan, very real.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/17/2006 |
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| Boy, you got it right with this poem, Susan, and the last line was the kicker. Big time. This was very good and I enjoyed reading it, although the subject was not pleasant, it was written in pain-smeared hearache. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
6/17/2006 |
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Susan
You just have to keep on opening more doors...until you find that one that leads to contentment...
As my Mum used to me over and over again " What's for you son.... wont go by you in life "....
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) |
6/17/2006 |
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(((Susan ))) this is powerful..Thanks for sharing!!
Xxx dove |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
6/17/2006 |
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| A very painful write that has been written with great skill. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/17/2006 |
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Such a touching read to me!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/17/2006 |
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| Painful look at life and your last sentence sums it up in a nut shell. |
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