|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|oh my, love this, the dessert and the chaos in one's mind and yet also...ah, that touch of ever so insightful humor!
bless you, Susan, you are amazin'.....
and 'don't forget THAT'! :)
|Reviewed by . ignis
|My daughter returned yesterday from vacation in Egypt. Around the Cairo metropole (where 21 million people live) you find a wide area of palmtrees that live on only 2mm or rain per year (which is less than we have on average in a day in The Netherlands). Theoretically it is impossible for the trees to survive, but they do and in abundance. Sometimes we perhaps just need to refuse to give in to the consequence certain situations seem to imply.
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|This one is, in the wonderful and wise words of those too young: "Neat... Awesome... Cool ! ! !
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I think I overthink a whole lot, and I forget more than I remember! Love that picture, too.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Light hearted but definately not frivolous write about who we are of poets and writers all. If we did not dream, think, imagine, question and embelish our day to day lifes what drab stories we would tell. You and I will always let our minds wander as we so often let our hearts do the same. I enjoyed and really related to this one my sexy Southern friend.
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|I also make hums that make my little daughter wonder what Dad was saying in these hums|
|Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
|I think I'm guilty of overthinking everything. I can really relate to this. Pierre.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I was sure I commented on this. You had me laughing because it sounded so much like me I thought you peeked in my window;-) Love it!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|and i thought i was going senile ;) no doubt, you remember the important things ...|
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|this is so me!|
|Reviewed by Martin Hebert
|~~Susan~~this made me smile..great poem~~
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Oh the fruits of being human.
You are, however, like the image dear Susan, life in the midst of barrenness. Keep running deep and pure!
Your bud ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
Your honesty and clarity speaks volumes in this one..
My Mom always used to tell me jokingly.. " Son, don't think too much...or your brains will burst..."..:)
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Susan, I know I had an awesome comment,
but I just can't remember it.
Maybe all who write poems are
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I resemble that . . .|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Idol Susan you Rock...ditty and all...hey me a siren???
Oh my mouth big enough as it is calling the piggies...you have to know me to know how vocal I can get...lol!!
Love Tinka :)