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The Shade Draws
by Susan K. de Vegter
Monday, April 02, 2007
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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In a diminished power of illusion
Her tears lasso a dream
Facets fade as the shade draws
Upon embroidered gloss she screams
In quiet sobs she remorses
What was then, is now... and gone
She holds the smile he gave her
Then pain strikes to her bones
Regrets of why it happened
Their crossroads of pure pain
When he came out of nowhere
Then for years echoed her name
It just wasn't meant to happen
As farrowed dreams paint fault
They bow to her fast sorrow
As her tears turn into salt
This world can be so beautiful
As dawn begins each day
But love can paint a canvas
Turn sunshine into grays
They take another pathway
Never knowing what is gone
To live a life without true love
Then go their way alone.


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Reviewed by Pierre Ortega 4/9/2007
What a beautiful write. I sincerely hope this doesn't happen to us, I don't believe I have ever known true love. I hope to someday.


Love, Pierre.
Reviewed by Sharon Lawson 4/6/2007
What a sad yet beautiful poem! I've had a sad experience with past love but this makes me think how lucky I now am to be married to such a lovely, caring & loving man who understands me, respects me, etc. Thank you :o)
Happy Easter!
Shaz X
Reviewed by Butch Howard 4/5/2007
"To live a life without true love" is a fate worse than death! The sadness of two who choose divergent pathways is truly heartbreaking. The words and sentiment, although sad, are beautiful.
~Butch
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 4/4/2007
Your words twisted my heart as you wrote about sunshine being turned to gray. powerful words that ring so true. Thank you. Liz
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 4/4/2007
Moving and personal. Strikes home.

Ron
Reviewed by jude forese 4/3/2007
sometimes love as a way of just passing us by ... we should open the shades, let the dawn in and draw a new day ... compelling pen, Susan ...





Reviewed by richard cederberg 4/3/2007
"Her tears lasso a dream"

Potent image here Belle-o-the-soul. Such melancholy threads in this write, but still permeated with an air of hopefulness. Peace and Blessings to you!

Light and Wisdom and Love ...
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling 4/3/2007
A beautiful, yet sad write my friend...enjoyed this well written poem.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/3/2007
Deep offering Susan!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) 4/3/2007
Deep thoughts to read this morning. Good transition through it's words. Lady J
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 4/3/2007
Alone is good for awhile, though I'm just getting to that bit where alone may soon not feel as good, or is it just the spring sap rising...
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 4/3/2007
But love can paint a canvas
Turn sunshine into grays

How sadly true, Susan, for very many souls.
Reviewed by Felix Perry 4/3/2007
Though this poem flows on a river of tears with strong and brilliant picture images it also leaves the readerwith a sense that no matter what the time of love was worth it and that hope for loving again in the future wasn't gone. Great one Susan.

Fee
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell 4/2/2007
Wonderfully written, Susan.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 4/2/2007
Such powerful emotion described in poignant poetry, Susan; beautifully penned sadness. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Laura Mayer 4/2/2007
Very lonely write Susan. Sometimes two people are not meant to be together. Well done!
Hugs, Laura



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