|Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
|What a beautiful write. I sincerely hope this doesn't happen to us, I don't believe I have ever known true love. I hope to someday.
|Reviewed by Sharon Lawson
|What a sad yet beautiful poem! I've had a sad experience with past love but this makes me think how lucky I now am to be married to such a lovely, caring & loving man who understands me, respects me, etc. Thank you :o)
|Reviewed by Butch Howard
|"To live a life without true love" is a fate worse than death! The sadness of two who choose divergent pathways is truly heartbreaking. The words and sentiment, although sad, are beautiful.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Your words twisted my heart as you wrote about sunshine being turned to gray. powerful words that ring so true. Thank you. Liz|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Moving and personal. Strikes home.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|sometimes love as a way of just passing us by ... we should open the shades, let the dawn in and draw a new day ... compelling pen, Susan ...
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|"Her tears lasso a dream"
Potent image here Belle-o-the-soul. Such melancholy threads in this write, but still permeated with an air of hopefulness. Peace and Blessings to you!
Light and Wisdom and Love ...
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|A beautiful, yet sad write my friend...enjoyed this well written poem.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Deep offering Susan!!
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|Deep thoughts to read this morning. Good transition through it's words. Lady J|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Alone is good for awhile, though I'm just getting to that bit where alone may soon not feel as good, or is it just the spring sap rising...|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|But love can paint a canvas
Turn sunshine into grays
How sadly true, Susan, for very many souls.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Though this poem flows on a river of tears with strong and brilliant picture images it also leaves the readerwith a sense that no matter what the time of love was worth it and that hope for loving again in the future wasn't gone. Great one Susan.
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
|Wonderfully written, Susan.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Such powerful emotion described in poignant poetry, Susan; beautifully penned sadness. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Laura Mayer
|Very lonely write Susan. Sometimes two people are not meant to be together. Well done!