Pride of Mankind
by Linda A Murray
Sunday, June 01, 2003
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I have accepted Tony's 16 word challenge.
The words are.... curiosity, fool, residence, blanket, windows, lifted, among, misery, time, light, fern, want, pride, kind, money, graze
Curiosity of the world has made a Fool of me.
Because of this the Windows of my life have been Lifted of my Blanket of Misery.
The Kind of Residence, I quest, cost Time and Money.
Of nether do I have.
I Want to walk Among Heaven's Light to see the Fern grow tall,
So the animal of mankind can Graze and be free of Pride.
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|Reviewed by Tony Nerone
|Hi Linda, You did well!! The purpose of the excersize was to immediately create a poem using the 16 words. Ms.Swank also required proper spelling.
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Grand poem !|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was an excellent response to the challenge, I loved this...
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
I think the way you have expressed yourself is very very ....well, comes from your heart here though they were 16 words someone challenged you with. You took them and better, owned them.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Linda, excellent in messeage beauty in expression...well done challenge;-)!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|yes....This is very excellent write from you...BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by serenety L
|Hi Linda. Hey, great as well. I like it. And special thanks to your comment on mine. Love. S.
PS: I love the sentence you have in your biography: You may be one person on this world, and the world to one person. Beautiful.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|very good write on this challenge