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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
6/10/2011 |
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So painfully true Chessly! Powerfully written too.
Thank you for sharing and for caring, continue to
write! May Abba Father strengthen and Bless you!
Much Love,
Margaret |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
6/8/2011 |
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| A touching write from your heart...beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by Nancy Taylor (Reader) |
4/21/2011 |
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| Bravo! This poem is so compact but says so much. |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
4/19/2011 |
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| Time to kiss and make up. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Alan Cook |
4/17/2011 |
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| Sums it up very nicely. A nice capsule look at human relationships. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
4/15/2011 |
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| as the old Garth Brooks song "Two Of A Kind" says, sometimes we fight just so we can make up!! |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
4/13/2011 |
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Tight write about a wee fight.
Unrequited love is oh so bloody painful.
Just about all relationships most probably end in such a manner. And when angry it can be compounded by doing something that one will regret and never forget.
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| Reviewed by Don Juan Amante |
4/13/2011 |
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| time to make up for certain! |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
4/12/2011 |
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| A snowball triggers an avalanche of emotion and in the end, the sun will once again shine brightly. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
4/12/2011 |
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| at the end of the day, these fights are always silly, are they not? i hope good tidings return to you soon. keep the faith, it'll all work out in the end. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/11/2011 |
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| it's a travesty how it's the "silly little" things that can get in the way of the real deal big'uns!! Shucks, Chessly, I can really feel this. Hopefully, the longer the time away, the bigger the making up!!! Says it all and sweetly. xx |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/10/2011 |
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| Funny how pride can affect our relationships with a loved one. Many can relate to this gem. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/10/2011 |
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| Sweet and lovely poem, Chessly! Love is such a mystery;-)... |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/10/2011 |
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Written with love and tenderness, Chessly,
and great fluency of expression.
John |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
4/9/2011 |
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Vividly evokes the pain xx
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
4/9/2011 |
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This is so touching and beautifully written...and it is ironic that the smallest things can trigger the bigggest
rifts, and leave us desolate...If this reflects real life, I hope things get resolved for you very soon...
Hugs, Diana... |
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
4/9/2011 |
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Being away from my lover is always hard. Well written with feeling and style Chessly.
Peace,
Dayvid |
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
4/9/2011 |
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It's a shame that so often "a silly little fight" can magnify into something that neither person expects. Sorry that things like this happen.
Mark |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
4/9/2011 |
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| Ditto..I know these feelings.. sweet lady...Hugss |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
4/9/2011 |
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Very well expressed.
It can be hoped the big picture will come into focus- and with it the value of love so that a reunion will be on solid ground.
John |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
4/9/2011 |
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| BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
4/8/2011 |
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Truly touching Chessly and sad also as to me personally sometimes love sure stinks indeed and seems in the long run left with a broken heart as usual my life story. You are a very beautiful person inside and out and he will come back your way to stay forever more my dear girl! They usually do. Your friend Laura
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
4/8/2011 |
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| I would guesstimate that of all lover's fights eighty percent of them are on the silly side. It is the words flying that make the fight take on a serious note. |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
4/8/2011 |
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The beauty of you comes through in this excellent poem, Chessly.
If the guy has any sense he'll be back...soon. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
4/8/2011 |
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| Kiss and make up quick! ~ Morgan |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
4/8/2011 |
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Those happen the silly fights I mean. Love will find a way back to you Gorgeous lady.
Love and Peace
Tony |
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