|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|So painfully true Chessly! Powerfully written too.
Thank you for sharing and for caring, continue to
write! May Abba Father strengthen and Bless you!
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|A touching write from your heart...beautiful!|
|Reviewed by Nancy Taylor (Reader)
|Bravo! This poem is so compact but says so much.|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Time to kiss and make up. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Alan Cook
|Sums it up very nicely. A nice capsule look at human relationships.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|as the old Garth Brooks song "Two Of A Kind" says, sometimes we fight just so we can make up!!|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Tight write about a wee fight.
Unrequited love is oh so bloody painful.
Just about all relationships most probably end in such a manner. And when angry it can be compounded by doing something that one will regret and never forget.
|Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
|time to make up for certain!|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|A snowball triggers an avalanche of emotion and in the end, the sun will once again shine brightly.|
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|at the end of the day, these fights are always silly, are they not? i hope good tidings return to you soon. keep the faith, it'll all work out in the end.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|it's a travesty how it's the "silly little" things that can get in the way of the real deal big'uns!! Shucks, Chessly, I can really feel this. Hopefully, the longer the time away, the bigger the making up!!! Says it all and sweetly. xx|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Funny how pride can affect our relationships with a loved one. Many can relate to this gem.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Sweet and lovely poem, Chessly! Love is such a mystery;-)...|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Written with love and tenderness, Chessly,
and great fluency of expression.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Vividly evokes the pain xx
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|This is so touching and beautifully written...and it is ironic that the smallest things can trigger the bigggest
rifts, and leave us desolate...If this reflects real life, I hope things get resolved for you very soon...
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|Being away from my lover is always hard. Well written with feeling and style Chessly.
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|It's a shame that so often "a silly little fight" can magnify into something that neither person expects. Sorry that things like this happen.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Ditto..I know these feelings.. sweet lady...Hugss|
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|Very well expressed.
It can be hoped the big picture will come into focus- and with it the value of love so that a reunion will be on solid ground.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Truly touching Chessly and sad also as to me personally sometimes love sure stinks indeed and seems in the long run left with a broken heart as usual my life story. You are a very beautiful person inside and out and he will come back your way to stay forever more my dear girl! They usually do. Your friend Laura
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I would guesstimate that of all lover's fights eighty percent of them are on the silly side. It is the words flying that make the fight take on a serious note.|
|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|The beauty of you comes through in this excellent poem, Chessly.
If the guy has any sense he'll be back...soon. -gene.
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|Kiss and make up quick! ~ Morgan|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Those happen the silly fights I mean. Love will find a way back to you Gorgeous lady.
Love and Peace