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First Date
by Jacqueline M. Baker

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its more of a metaphor so dont be so sure you understand it

tell her that shes beautiful
and hope it works this time
even held the door for her
a gentleman in crime

walked her to her door tonight
watched her turn the key
licked your lips micheviously
tonight it was meant to be

She led you in for a few drinks
stared deeply into your eyes
she has no idea what shes doing
and for that begins demise

kiss her gently on her cheek
she moves to kiss your neck
happy she is so receptive
you both fall onto the deck

looking for the right protection
the lust started to fade
anger appeared and she screamed
*dont kill me with that spade*

Full moon covered by clouds
darkness had come to you
she ran away into the forest
and the chase was so fun to do

catching her was the best of all
her body so full of adrenaline
you chewed her up and spit her out
tomorrow youll do it again...

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Reviewed by Duane Weide
Vampire? Werewolf? Rapist?
Reviewed by ur lil brother
i think that the poem was ok even tho i didnt get it because im mentally retarded and i dont have n e friends!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed by ur sissy
Hey wutz up sissy great job luv ya bye!!!
Reviewed by Erica Ivory
LOL.. Very good.. A definate smile.. and i will have to watch out for men like
Reviewed by Brian Smith
Jacqueline, that was quite well done!

I actually thought it to be the woman who would ensnare the man, at first . . . until it was apparent that the man uses his charm as a tool to feed off from nave young women, a user, a player, a succubus . . . feeding off from the emotions and passions of women . . . all to selfishly feed himself, leaving them wounded and hurt . . . another casualty left in his wake.
Reviewed by Brian Smith
I actually thought it was going to be the woman that ensnared the man from time to time until it was aparent that the man uses hi charm as a tool to feed off from women, a player, a sucubus . . . feeding off from the emotions and passions of women . . . all to selfishly feed himself, leaving them wounded and hurt.
Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Very nice. I like the rhyme!
Reviewed by Tony Nerone
Yikes!! All that cholesterol. I liked this,ty.
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Nice write.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Very good.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
You have it all planned out really well, haven't you? Good luck to you!

Sandie Angel :o)

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