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|Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
This poem carries a lot of impression
in the form. The title, "Forth and Back"
obviously catches the reader to a balanced/off-balance setting to start, and I don't know if you planned it, but for me the
emotional fulcrum is "so much has happened"
This line is also the visual center.
There are eight lines leading to center, and six lines after--might there be two lines to add to polishing the power of this form?
Excellent piece! Vicky
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
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