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Forth & Back
by zeta zen
Tuesday, July 29, 2003

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I think about you often

It's just that my love is still 

dead nailed in a black coffin

Not understanding 

You were forth then you went back

to come forth again

while I am still back

So much as happened

I feel trapped

and I can't

find my peace of mind

Forth and then back again

Don't make this a trend

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Reviewed by Vicky Jeter 7/29/2003
This poem carries a lot of impression
in the form. The title, "Forth and Back"
obviously catches the reader to a balanced/off-balance setting to start, and I don't know if you planned it, but for me the
emotional fulcrum is "so much has happened"
This line is also the visual center.
There are eight lines leading to center, and six lines after--might there be two lines to add to polishing the power of this form?
Excellent piece! Vicky
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 7/29/2003
Yeah, been there! Don't make it a trend, Zeta! Stay strong...
In Spirit,
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