by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Sunday, May 30, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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sign, sealed, delivered fate.
Should have been added up before,
instead there's a failing score.
Joker dealed mathematics,
the arithmetic of foolish dramatics.
In a crazy world maddening,
forgetting fractions of isn't good adding.
We need all of our minds capabilities,
to deal with lifes hostilities.
Minusing fractions figuring a solution,
could lead to ones distruction.
Anything mind distorting,
there's nothing wrong in aborting.
The effects of alcohol drinking,
could block a brains best thinking.
Too much drug use,
the mathematics of mental abuse.
When it's all added and done,
good math benefits number one,
lifes becomes more fun,
shinning under a full sun.
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|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Could block a brain's best thinking. "Had a little drink about an hour ago, and it went right to my head." (just singing)|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I can proof this statement...live with it daily!!
"The effects of alcohol drinking, could block a brains best thinking"
It "could" not...........but it DOES!!
Poetry of wisdom yet again!!
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|WONDERFUL satirical poem, Grady!|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Fun write, serious subject. Great job!|