by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Wednesday, January 12, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Blinders, like I don't already know. I know and am aware.
raise a face sob.
so melt your snow.
Even if not,
I'll cool down hot.
There comes a time,
a mind moves sublime.
The snow may fall,
still I bounce the ball.
So what if I fumble,
you want make me stumble.
Care has moved on,
no longer acted upon.
If snow reaches ground,
I won't slip down.
Tired of slidding,
there'll be no hiding.
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|Reviewed by P. Michaels
|Good message for us all, Grady. Those snow jobs can freeze us into believing untruths, if we let them.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Inspiring piece Grady!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|keep on expressin' yourself, buddy; don't let anyone get to you! i love how you write! great job!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Don't even talk or think about snow...or we will get 3 feet and you will be the one who's slidding...;) Ed|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|"A snow it all" - HO, HO! Marvelous phrase and thoughts here, Grady.|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|Okay Grady I understand I get these moments and let the muse be free.|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|just expression from an outside attack of a snow it all. not to be taken personal. G|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Sometimes you must make your stand on solid ground. Inspiring poem, Grady.|