Mice & Men
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Friday, August 19, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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All my life I fought at,
not being a rat.
Born a baby unknowing,
what if a mouse was showing?
I would have never known,
I was a baby,
not yet grown.
Grown into adulthood,
still trying not to insult good.
I love cheese,
no rat please!
I do the best I can,
I am only a man.
Age strongly distinguishes,
maturity surely relinquishes.
Of mice and men,
I'm far from the rodent den.
But I still love cheese,
so at times,
I sail the seven seas.
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Nicely done, Grady. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace.
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Cheese is worth the trip. Enjoyed.|
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
it took a brave heart to write this orignal piece.
We as men , always stating how courageous we are
but it isn't always about that .
As yOU HAVE pointed out , very artisticly, men also like cheese
too....i know i do!
Rich Criso Suarez
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Hope you don't see the invisible rabbit that Lennie did:)
Though the allegory is much the same...
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|perfect, grady, just super! bravo!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Each stanza contains a nugget of wisdom which shines perfectly.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh I love cheese too...and for sailing those seven seas....sounds like heaven to me!!
And you are a wiseman too Grady!!
Thanks for sharing!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Being a man you can't be perfect. Glad I am female :-)
Kidding aside.........I love the way you ended this one.