coming to this board
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Sunday, September 04, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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just dropped in, rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrroar,
watch out little piggy!
coming to this poetic board,
in the jungle a lion roared.
trying not to hear the sound,
let the bull get me down.
animals are all around,
everywhere you can hear their sound.
sweating the big,
screaming of the pig,
about to be butchered for food,
better him than my mood.
top of the food chain,
already there's a gain.
i'm no meal,
so on the pig squeal.
screaming for dear life,
don't sweat the small stuff
my dear wife.
counting my blessing,
day up dressing.
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|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|There for the grace of god I'm not a pig. Normally get called far worse..|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Fire up the grill, I'll bring the wine!
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Striking reading from "coming to this board".
Healthy Long Life, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh I feed those piggies..and they are delicious...with
an apple in it's mouth....no squealing NO MORE!!
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I eat everything but the squeal.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Great poetic write in mood, rhyme, and reasoning.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Maybe you should eat the Baltimore Ravens, no more squawking will you then hear, no more loses from too much beer...ed|