Prayer Proclamation
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Saturday, December 02, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Religious folks don't take this too serious, if you want to criticize anyone, make it Tom Cruz. Personally I can't hang with that scientology crap. |
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Man finally went cordless,
God has always been regardless.
He runs a cordless network,
prayer and faith makes it work.
Tom and his scientology,
can't match the Lords technology.
People's faith I don't knock,
but I know the Lord's rock.
Twenty four seven,
I'll place my bet on heaven.
I hardly attend church at all,
but I'm no fool to the Lord's call.
If I was a preacher held liable,
it would be a 38 inside my bible.
They say God works in mysterious,
so with me he couldn't be furious.
I'm about as mysterious as they come,
will be until I succumb.
This is my God's honest truth,
my wife doesn't sit in the house of Ruth.
Anyway I'm no preacher on docket,
my 38 caliber is in my pocket.
At least I'm no scientologist,
I believe in the master Biologist.
One
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
12/5/2006 |
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One, you are not boring!
You sure have a way with words.
I appreciate your honesty about your beliefs, and your unique statement of faith!!!
Connie |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
12/3/2006 |
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Having gone through the 'baby blues' after my son Nicholas was born the entire time I breastfed, I know it's real. I get peeved when a man makes holy than thou comments on birth pain, etc. anyway, so shut up Tom!
Chrissy |
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| Reviewed by J M |
12/2/2006 |
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| No critique from ME. I can't hang with it either this one is eye opener "ONE" |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
12/2/2006 |
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| You've got my vote on this one Grady! It's quite the world we live in! |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
12/2/2006 |
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I was just reading this morning about the famed people of Scientology, and statistics showing that on average most who delve in this "religion", usually find their way out within two to three years...
Personally, I am for anyone or anybody who is good...
that's all that matters,
and if I can plant His seed, along the way, I thank God!
Good write, One
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~ |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen (Reader) |
12/2/2006 |
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I take no offense to this and in fact I find it, and subsequently you, fascinating! this is an intriguing expression of your faith.
Susan |
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