3:10 to Humor
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Rated "G" by the Author.
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The end of a long work day.
Everyday I work my azz off fully,
time is the great big bully.
I just can't wait until three ten,
the work days almost over,
but tomorrow I'll have to do it again.
It's funny how time creeps,
it seems as though it's playing for keeps.
Part of my style,
is a laugh or at least a smile.
But most of time it's phony,
so slice me up like baloney.
On the way out the door we be joking,
during a lot of fun poking.
I won't decieve,
it feels great to leave.
3:10 to humor,
or the end of a work day of trauma.
Either way the work days over,
I know it for sure after entering my car for cover.
So much for the fading glory,
with time being the star of the story.
No use looking for an apology,
time will never say it's sorry.
The clock just keeps on ticking,
each and everyday I'll go on working.
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|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Nice to see you back! Love Holly|
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|Plan for your retirement and fill it with things you know you'll get to do. Then find a way to do them now after work. Hell, 3:10 you got half the day left. Good write. it's the lament of all 9 to 5 er's Lady J|
|Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
|Enjoyable read. R|
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|So, you're saying you're full of baloney? I enjoyed your story of spending your time waiting for "TIME"-- 3:10
Some day, you can retire and be bored.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|I love your style, your smile leaves me with one.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|your humor soar!!
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|such is life but i love the clever humor!|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|LOVE your writings, G; very well penned! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D