Love Dropped In
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Wednesday, April 02, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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After it did, it was here to stay! A poem expressing true and powerful love.
Hey, it was always there,
Romeo and Juliet had love to spare.
My mind was as short as my hair,
truly I just didn't dare.
Love has always been a hurting thing,
made my heart and soul ring.
Ring a ding ding,
a love song I just couldn't sing.
Never knew what I was missing,
until our lips met kissing.
All the love I had missed,
came flowing back as we kissed.
Then during the explosion,
I came to my final conclusion,
love isn't just an illusion,
we just have to do away with the confusion,
then prevent evils intrusion.
I am our loves keeper,
more powerful than deaths grime reaper.
Able to leap huge buildings with a single bound,
let no force bring this love down.
When death do us apart,
even beyond the grave you'll be in my heart,
just like you were from the very start..
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|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|You always have so much wisdom in your poems Grady, stay well my firend, love Holly|
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|Keeping older love feeling like new is a monumental task yet so beautiful when felt. Good write felt here. Lady J|
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|Reviewed by Charlie
|I like this. The first stanza's my favorite. I really like the "ring-a-ding-ding" line. --Charlie|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Like The Ones Who Love You Most Always Hurt You The Most...
You're Still Together If It For BEING ALONE Then Its Somethin SPECIAL
It Ain't Love...You Romantic...
Because TRUE LOVE Is COMPASSION...
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|yes--a well written poem--i enjoyed it very much|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|A beautiful and wise poem Grady, enjoyed.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Absolutely beautiful write, Gem; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Lew Duffey
|This is one beautiful write.
You are right. To fear love is to fear life. Both should be indulged in.