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1- Reviewer Retreat
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Friday, May 02, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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The dominos are falling!

In this field of wheat
I guess I can still eat.
I had one viewer to retreat,
I passed her on the street.
Man did she look sweet,
made my life complete.

Anyway the dominos are falling,
I can hear Jesus calling.
Forgive their trespasses,
it's alright to kiss their azzes.
Share your tissues,
we all have issues.

Thank you Lord for the sage,
cause I feel like a monkey in a cage,
of course I can handle my rage.
I might be like a big gorilla,
but I find verse a thrilla.
It calms the beast,
when he desires to feast.




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Reviewed by Connie Faust 5/4/2008
Yeah. Writing verse is a "thrilla" and it sure comes in handy when you're in need of calming down. ;)

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks 5/3/2008
And it's great to see someone express themselves so honestly in their poems as you do. Kudos, OpG!
Blessings ~~ Micke
Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 5/3/2008
Loved the last stanza, good one....
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 5/3/2008
I enjoyed this, have a good one!
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 5/3/2008
Cute one, G...e
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