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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
9/19/2009 |
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| WRITTEN WELL WITH VERY GOOD PHRASES AND IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
9/18/2009 |
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Where I Come From Winners And Losers Mean Same Thing,i.e. Like Me If I Were You I'd Be More Interested In Fact:
I Didn't Win,I Didn't Lose,But
I Sure As Hell I Am Going Too Collect...
You Will Be My Witness...
TRASK... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
9/18/2009 |
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| i guess that there are also many ways to win-this is well said |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
9/18/2009 |
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| Saying "I'm sorry" has a way of belittling you. I have learned that from experience. We are, one an all, subject to or pre-conceived thoughts and prejudices. When it comes to love, that is the only emotion, I have found, that allows the heart to rule, and when the heart senses that love is being flaunted and ridiculed it acts, not necessarily in the best interest of itself. Loving our fellow man is preconditioned by loving ourselves first. Not egotistical self love, but loving who we are. Got a bit carried away here, I suppose, just trying to make some sense of my thoughts. |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
9/18/2009 |
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Excellent poem,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
9/18/2009 |
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Just remember this sweet sweet man you are number one..love the way you did this..always be yourself.. thats all that matters in life to me.. not being a winner ..and far as losers there every where ...(ooopps did I say that)have a great and safe weekend OK ..keep smiling its beautiful...Hugss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxoxo |
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