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Our Ways
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Friday, June 25, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Put the mirror in front of a vampire, his image will not appear. |
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Many of us wish for
better days
but never do much about
our messed up ways
We get stuck in a rut
then we become lifes slut
We screw around with life
it screws around with us
so flows the misery and strife
Life don't give a hoot if
we're not happy
and others like to see us
miserable and crappy
We should give a hoot
and don't self pollute
There is a solution
to self pollution
Some find it in the Bible book
others won't even take a look
Then others find it in humanity
and do away with their insanity
A great deal of the population
is crazy in the head
sleeping right in the devils bed
Personally I have a few
screwed up ways of dealing
each and every day I be
praying and self appealing
however I don't do no darn stealing
and you can forget killing
Isn't life just thrilling
opg
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| Reviewed by Eileen Granfors |
6/25/2010 |
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| Time to take our lives back into controlling what we can . . . so much is out of our control, we need to go with the little things, and the small comforts. . .like writing. Good thoughts here. |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
6/25/2010 |
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As always sweet sweet man such a pleasure to read your wise and wonderful writing..hope all well Hugss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxox |
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
6/25/2010 |
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It is so true. We get stuck in a rut of self-degradation thinking we can't do anything more than we are doing. But WE CAN! If we break out of our normality and not be afraid of failure, we can change the world to a place of harmony and love.
Peace,
Dayvid |
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| Reviewed by Lew Duffey |
6/25/2010 |
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Duh, I think so but then I'm not sure.
but keep the advice coming and keep writing more
God bless,
Lew |
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