by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Sunday, August 08, 2010
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I'm trying to forgive my oldest brother but he done screwed over me so much, I can't stand the sight of him. Actually I done forgave him, but I still dodge him every chance I get. I actually could literally piss on this dudes grave. Of course this is just a feeling, I'll cry when he die and say goodbye. The picture is my deadbeat dad, I finally forgave him, and I didn't piss on his grave, I've learned to maturely behave.
Easy to forgive
in a pigs eye give
If a pig knew he was chow
he'd escape somehow
Later on he'd be out for the get back
oh yes the oinker would attack
Incoming oinker flack
Pig train would get knocked off the track
The little oinkers would try to run free
The bacon and ham you'd see
would have a higher catch the pig fee
Anyway if it is so easy to forgive
God wouldn't have kicked Adam
out of the Garden
He would have gave first man an
After you done screwed over me past
three strikes you're out
and still keep traveling the stupid route
I will get angry and pout
and you better be glad there's no
fist and shout
I want to forgive even the fool
but the devil knows and will get
in the drool
However God will keep taking you
cause forgiveness is still the best tool
My good old tool box is a bit tainted
cause it's so hard to get a
good picture painted
Anyway Jesus was the only one sainted
however I am very acquainted
I'm just a regular earth man
fighting every monkey wrench the devil
throws in my holy plan
I'll be lucky to forgive myself during
this crazy life span
Hopefully I can
Lord help us!
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|Reviewed by John Domino
|A timeless message on forgiveness! This was the "Right Time" for me to hear it!
John Michael Domino
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|It's the most wonderful feeling in the world when we can finally, after such a struggle, forgive. Even those who will never deserve our forgiveness. You are a big man Grady, a good man.|
|Reviewed by * Starman * *
|I know how you feel. Jesus said I am the door, not the doormat. You done good here!|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Forgiveness is the beginning of the healing process. First, however, one must forgive themselves, so that forgiveness can be given after receiving...
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
I hope you have a great outcome with your brother, it must be really hard, and in the meantime your feelings are expressing some great poetry...