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Thorns End
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Wednesday, November 17, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Roses are red, thorns prick instead, depending on the head, or what is later on said.


The rose is a lovely flower
so is a romance until it turns sour
Romance gone thorn
lovers stressed and worn
One maybe wishing the other
was never born
Both left wondering what
the heck they were doing
with their relationship
in the wind blowing

Like two ships on the ocean
trying to deal with the motion
Seems a witch brewed her
evil potion
At first roses were presented
beautiful petals intended
Later on the thorns dented
Seems like a romance rented
Rent being a temp affair
seemly a short breath of air

Until death do us apart
ended up with a broken heart
Love was just great at the start
The beginning can't come back
cause the end is on the attack
Both lovers will be lucky to
escape their disappointing flack
Maybe at the beginning
the devil screamed jack

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Reviewed by Lew Duffey 11/18/2010
Sounds like one of many sad stories.
God bless,
Lew
Reviewed by Andy Turner 11/17/2010
"Romance gone thorn" Brilliance! I'll use that in conversations :)

I think you may mean, sCreamed?
Top work, bro!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/17/2010
Ah yes, OPG; love gone wrong. I think that "love" gone wrong was never love in the first place; but that's just my opinion. Thanks for sharing, friend. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 11/17/2010
Unique and absorbing poem in your persuasive signature style!
Really nice ending too ~
Blessings,
Christine



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