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Travel to Unravel*
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Sunday, June 15, 2003
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If I travel
To unravel
My behavioral
Habitual taste
It will not be a waste
Travel to unravel
Uravel to travel
Unravel to know
Then away you go
Travel to unravel
Then you'll know
And maybe you'll grow
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| Reviewed by Lynn Barry |
6/15/2003 |
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| Whenever I travel I do see things differently...as always...clever and well composed... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/15/2003 |
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| super write, grady; well done, my friend! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by serenety L |
6/15/2003 |
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| Wow. Good write. S. |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
6/15/2003 |
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| Traveling can make a difference at times |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/15/2003 |
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"Travel to unravel" or "Unravel to Travel" - either way it's good.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
6/15/2003 |
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Good Thoughts.
Great Write!
tony |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
6/15/2003 |
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Hey this is so good Grady!!!!!
Your just poppin them left and right {{day off smiles}}}
Lady Peg |
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