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WritingMistakes
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

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Can make you or break you. Go for the make, you might end up eating cake. Failure occurs when we don't even try.
Not when we give it our best and fail.

Grammar, spelling, organization,
drive you up a tree on ocassion.
The eye of the eagle,
soaring way up high,
searching for its prey,
i not dotted,
word spelled wrong,
chronologically off.


The predator strikes,
stops the writer in his tracks,
back to the drawing board,
pray to the Lord.


Get that word right,
make it fit for God's sight.
Disappoint the bird of prey,
send the vulture on his way.


If you like to write,
do your best to make it right.
Don't retreat in the fight.
When the going gets tough,
the tough get going,
don't hide,
don't run,
write on.


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Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
:) Write on, indeed, Grady!
Reviewed by jude forese
very proficiently thought out...
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Yip write right on Grady!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Sometimes we have to read between the lines, my friend. I make mistakes all the time, but I hope that readers will go beyond my words and understand what I'm trying to say. I've never studied writing or taken any classes regarding lyrics and meter, etc. I just write what comes from my heart...it doesn't always "fit" but I hope the feelings are there. My kind friend, keep writing as you always have...you bring smiles to the den. Kind of like sunshine...

*Linda*
Reviewed by R. Steven Reynolds
Write, read, speak, hone, read, speak, print. Smile with satisfaction.

Steve
Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Well said.. I for one just write and whatever it is..it is..
Reviewed by Nancy D.
Way to go Grady.

Nancy
Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Write on my friend.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
OH GRADY
{{{SMILES}}} I am the worst for these mistakes....
Loved this write my friend...
{{{smiles}}}

"Get that word right,
make it fit for God's sight.
Disappoint the bird of prey,
send the vulture on his way.



If you like to write,
do your best to make it right.
Don't retreat in the fight.
When the going gets tough,
the tough get going,
don't hide,
don't run,
write on."

Lady peg

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Write on Grady...keep the pen full of ink....floria
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