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A Kind Word
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

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I give them. I want to recieve them. Humor me, enlighten me, brighten my soul. Just expression everyone, don't take it to serious.

give me one,
or give me none.
i don't need the storm,
the clothes line of a strong arm,
the lash of the sharp tongue,
the beat of the war drum.
the red in the ink,
the sock black eye pink.

i want sunshine in my face,
no words of negative disgrace,
the jealously of a winning race.
i like to feel good,
smile and laughing mood.
joy in my heart,
trump of the ace card.

a kind word to enlighten my soul,
words of write joy unfold,
painted sunrise in light,
beauty from your site.
joy through my senses,
even if pretenses.

a kind word!


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Reviewed by P. Michaels 11/18/2003

Kind words sure do help, don't they, Grady?
Your Ohio friend, Pat
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 11/18/2003
I ;) Grady!!

I Luv Grady!!

I admire Grady!!

I appreciate Grady!!

And the kind word will be....Fine write Grady!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 11/18/2003
Good write and let me give you a few kind words...I appreciate you!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/18/2003
kind words are apt to leave a more lasting impression than negative ones. i know for true! wonderful write; always enjoy reading you! love you, grady! (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by William Neven 11/18/2003
So, G.E., I see you bring good things to light. [I know. Stick to the review.] Anyway, good flowing descriptive phrases together with well-contrived contrasts make this one a winner for me.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 11/18/2003
Awesome Grady Kind words leave deeper impressions on others.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 11/18/2003
Grady....lovely write!!!!
Reviewed by Jeff Mason 11/18/2003
Some interesting thought-play going on here G.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 11/18/2003
The kind word is: This is good!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 11/18/2003
Hello Grady!

What a wonderful feeling you have to wake up to.

Love this write!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

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