by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Wednesday, January 21, 2004
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Emotions run high when making love,
gets you so excited it moves you in the groove.
Emotions run high when you're pissed off,
chokes you all up and makes you almost cough.
Emotions run high if you're about to die,
makes your heart and soul want to cry.
Keeping your cool is hard to do,
when life pushes and presses you.
Holding on becomes hard as hell,
makes you want to scream and almost yell.
You try to be cool,
but on you drool.
Fangs pop out,
The next few seconds seems like eternity,
when you're pushed to an extremity.
You barely survive,
being lucky you're still around to thrive.
When life returns to the norm,
you be glad you survived the storm.
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Great depiction of human emotions. Thank you, Grady. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by P. Michaels
Yes, Grady it is hard to deal with those emotions. If it helps any, we all have them. Peace be with you. This poem was done well.
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Excellent expression of self-control, Grady.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|LOL at Tinka's review
Grady, so true! Moods DO affect our judgement, whether good OR bad! Very good write; always enjoy your wisdom-filled gems!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Emotions are like a baby with a wet nappy....touchy!!
Wet Or high and dry!!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|And it builds character, facing the storms head on, great stuff|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|The storm becomes a mere ripple.....when you have that love thing going on....;)
Great stuff Grady, ty, Dani
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|amazing thing those emotions, i enjoyed how you explored them here|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Hi Grady....and it's what makes us stronger...getting through storms...life is certainly like this...great write that we can all relate to...floria|