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| Reviewed by Pier Tyler |
2/24/2005 |
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Awesome write. I like these liberating lines...
(Now I am
Free..
To find who I am..
Free to be..) |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
2/14/2005 |
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| Some men have an image of the "ideal" woman in their minds. When it seems they have found her in human form, they worship at her feet. But when the illusion has faded and they see that she is a mere mortal, they drop her as undesirable. The woman either loses herself in his image of her and tries to maintain the illusion (in vain), or drops the poor misguided soul after she's onto his game. If this is a real experience-Just remember, Erica, that nothing is wasted! Cry your tears and then bless the experience for teaching you a valuable lesson... |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
2/11/2005 |
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| Erica....deep write as usual from you....hope this is only a fiction...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN!! |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
2/10/2005 |
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So much to learn in this.
We can't take so much for granted, but must learn to see...letting go of ourselves so we don't impose on the picture.
Wonderful.
John |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
2/10/2005 |
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Epitomizes disillusion. Hope it's just a poem.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
2/10/2005 |
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Dear Erica,
This is such a poignant poem and it brought back painful memories for me. I know only too well how this feels. Why do those that claim to love, want to destroy the object of their affections when the romance is over? Surely it is better to leave a person with their dignity. I pray that you find the kind of love that provides you recognition for the beautiful person you are.
Thank you for sharing
Love Chanti |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
2/10/2005 |
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| well done |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
2/10/2005 |
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| It is indeed powerful and reminds me of the wife who has gone through abuse. There is a better life though. And there are men who treat you like the angel that one deserves to be treated. |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
2/10/2005 |
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wow
this is so powerful...........and the emotions roar with wisdom, insight and pain. |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
2/10/2005 |
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| ah but you can build yourself up now that you are no longer an illusion. the worse place in the world is on someone's pedestal, the fall is so brutal. this is an excellent poem on that subject |
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