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Love in a Box
by Andy James Turner
Sunday, October 02, 2011
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Aye, never found such a lassie yet!



My love I kept in a black box
Labelled: bibs and bobs
Unpleasant things
With very large locks

My lover she made a new key
Released the locks
That set me free

My love is like
A musical box
A joy for the heart
Intended for her
And designed for me



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Reviewed by Bernice Lakota 11/11/2012
absolutely a joy to read
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader) 7/12/2012
This is quite a telling tale. I like what Janna Hill said: "build it & she will come" because your closing line, "And designed for me", is exactly the formula that sums up your literary sketch here of the locked black box becoming musical. For me this is way more beautiful than cute; it says a great deal to me. ~~ Diana
Reviewed by Shirley Houston 5/13/2012
Only "she" will ever open the box so well guarded! Love this one; and totally relating!
Reviewed by Layla Thomas 1/22/2012
yes, like a musical box I can imagine it well. "it's a small world after all" is the tune the one I wound up this afternoon. I sometimes imagine though that i am the little plastic ballerina resting up on top of a small spring, so easily removed by innocent little hands...lovely. spirited write here Andy.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/10/2011
Sweet write, Andy... ...it took me a long while but I think I've found the one. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 10/9/2011
A sweet poem, Andy. Enjoyed.
Sheila
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 10/7/2011
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Marguerite Lemoine 10/6/2011
I would say - life is within the box - The outter part of the box will die and return to the earth from which it came but the life in the box will return to the Heaven from which it came. Be a little flower in the Kingdom of God's Garden. Marguerite Little Flower
Reviewed by Jon Willey 10/5/2011
whimsy and a jingle Andy -- it's marvelously entertaining -- you were thinking outside of the box on this one -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 10/4/2011
Like Jack in a box...it will pop..just wait you will see~
smiles,
Christine
Reviewed by Janna Hill 10/4/2011
Awww. Box of Dreams - build it & she will come..
:) Janna
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 10/3/2011
But the music box plays on!
Love's Song, just a new verse
for Your poem to live on!!

Play It ~Andy~

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Christine Tsen 10/3/2011
Sweet high-spirited rhythm to this little whimsical gem!
Love,
Christine
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 10/3/2011
Cute...lively write! How you must have danced when she set you free!!!

Anna
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 10/3/2011
My love is like
A musical box

Wow, keep on playin music!
Reviewed by John Flanagan 10/2/2011
A fine way of putting it, Andy.
Yes!

John
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 10/2/2011
A rarity, to find the one with the key. Hold tightly to it. Lovely piece! ~Elizabeth
Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle 10/2/2011
This is awesome Andy and well written. Thanks.

With Love,
Cindy
Reviewed by Laura Fall 10/2/2011
A heartfelt poem well done so wonderfully indeed Laura
Reviewed by JMS Bell 10/2/2011
IT ALWAYS AMAZES ME...THOSE WONDERFUL INSTRUMENTS THAT GOD WILL USE TO SET US FREE FROM ONE THING OR ANOTHER. PRAISE BE HIS HOLY NAME! THANKS FOR SHARING ANDY AND ENJOY YOUR LOVED FILLED BOX. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
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