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|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|a little haunting
love the ending
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Very lovely and wonderful imagery,
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Creation mumurs ceaselessly, if only we'd listen. And if there's one thing I've learned, it's that time is relative. (Only some days, I tend to forget. Guess I need a few more lessons.)
A most thought provoking piece, Kevin. Thanks.
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|this one too. your images are vivid, which is not something your poems lack, but i can see it more focused here.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|A thought-provoking piece. Well-done!
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~