|Reviewed by Gerald Tate
|Very sad but inmportant tale. It is amazing what lengths people will stoop for money.
Well written Abdi.
|Reviewed by Fauzia Farrah
|The story and the poem both brought tears to my eyes . i was astonished about this incident when i first heard it on BBC ,Well put Abdinoor . It shows your unique ways at looking at things/situations and for that i salute you.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Sad, touching, powerful. You have moved me to tears.|
|Reviewed by Fartun Hussein (Reader)
|This was one of the best poems I have read.
Tears flow to my eyes while I was reading this. Imagining those poor women and what they had to go through, because of one selfish man.
I hope they are getting the care they did now. I don’t blame the hospital, I don’t think they had choice, but they have my gratitude.
|Reviewed by Cedric III
|ma fiicanahay? [sorry about the spelling lol]
this is sad.
the situation you prefaced this poem by is sad and shouldnt have to happen though i know that things in Somalia work a whole lot differently than most other places.
imagine, if a womb could talk, it would be sorry for causing such pain and disruption. but then one would have to argue that the womb was just preforming the duties it was created to perform when something else got in the way and sabotaged its actions...
but i think this is a beautiful gesture.
if no side is "man enough" to admit fault and say sorry to those who lost needlessly in the interim then lets allow the womb to step up and take the blame so that closure can be found.
quite a unique idea =)
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|I believe... in order for growth, comes with it, anquish...
Many an innocent man and women, sacrificed for their betterment, unfortunately. All in all, this doesn't make it an excuse and it depends on who is, the benefactor(?)...(either way, someone is affected)
If only, there was a way to "grow together???"
I sit an ponder over what is more advantageous, a "Headache" or "sitting on the verge of a migraine"...
Fantastic write, sad,sad, subject...
Love and Peace~
We all need it...
|Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
|This is important. The way it was done was well thought out. Good work. Regards Joyce|
|Reviewed by Marguerite Lemoine
|Perhaps the doctor had no alternative - Those things are sometimes necessary. lil flower|
|Reviewed by jacqueline amos
|the womb the link between the heavens and earth, the dark to light, the institutions of tribes, the sea that lies, within the beginning of life, in the beginning word was law, womb-man manifestation of the holy ground, the closes to God. The incubation of creations. The one who lives with.|
|Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)
|This makes my tears flow Abdi-Noor as I ponder what kind of men are these and then you make me remember with your words that all is not lost, at least not today. Peace and blessings my friend.|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|very sad and touching poem|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|heartwrenching! >tears <
powerfully sad write; when will all this madness end??
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :( >tears <
*continued prayers to you and your family, and also somalia*
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
you are still--ALWAYS--in my thougts and prayers
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A most powerful statement, Abdi-Noor. Truly hope expectant mothers will now get the care they need.|