|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|I hope this poem is just an expression of your poetic license and has not happened to you in reality for it is just too sad to imagine. I am sending happiness and blessings your way.
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Stabs like a knife to the heart.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|powerfully emotive ...|
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
This is so sad, and a commentary on how the economy can destroy people's lives. But more than that, I can feel your deep pain at losing your loved ones. This brought a tear to my eye. I'm sorry for your loss.
|Reviewed by pat medlin
|heart pierceing piece...write write write|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|So direct and honest, David.
Take good care.
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|Haunting and sad. Great writing though. I'm sure the minutes seem like hours. Transform the pain into words. Magical things will happen. Don't listen to your head too much. I've been through this myself. Absent the trains.|
|Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
|a sad poem, David. I hope it didn't happen to you. Laurel|