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Alone in the Dark
by David Blair
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She left me,
the love of my life.
I lost my job
and marriage needs money
to oil over difficulties.
Now I had so little.

She caught a train
to the City.
I never hear from her
or our kid.
That breaks my heart
alone in the dark.

I lie in the night
thinking terrible thoughts
how to end the misery.
And as if to mock me
I hear the Central train
on the hour...every long hour.






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Reviewed by Joy Hale
I hope this poem is just an expression of your poetic license and has not happened to you in reality for it is just too sad to imagine. I am sending happiness and blessings your way.

Joy L. Hale
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Stabs like a knife to the heart.
Reviewed by jude forese
powerfully emotive ...
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat

This is so sad, and a commentary on how the economy can destroy people's lives. But more than that, I can feel your deep pain at losing your loved ones. This brought a tear to my eye. I'm sorry for your loss.

Reviewed by pat medlin
heart pierceing piece...write write write
Reviewed by John Flanagan
So direct and honest, David.
Take good care.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Haunting and sad. Great writing though. I'm sure the minutes seem like hours. Transform the pain into words. Magical things will happen. Don't listen to your head too much. I've been through this myself. Absent the trains.
Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
a sad poem, David. I hope it didn't happen to you. Laurel
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