|Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
|Great surf! There's more to gain; whatever is is asailing, conquored;
|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|Good poem Sara. If only life was as simple as riding a wave. Waves all come from the same direction, life comes at you from all directions at once.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A powerful metaphorical offering, Sara. Thanks for sharing it. Love, peace, and strength to you,
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Nicely iced. Too cool. Back to school.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|And if you fall in. SWIM for your life.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|You are a good poetic surfer Sara!!
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|Excellent take on the subject of life -- the metaphor of life vs wave in a poem is ... "iced" (perfect!)
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|interesting and real words of life and living brought to us in the talk of the wave rider, what a stunning comparison,well done Sara.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|you ride the waves of life with conviction and determination ...
good poem, Sara ... enjoyed reading ...
|Reviewed by A PAX
very pop........and wise..........good combo sara
|Reviewed by Rusty Daily
|That was fun to read and yup, it always gets better.
However the pessimist would say, "It always gets darker before it gets pitch." lol