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| Reviewed by Daring Sunshine |
10/29/2006 |
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Great surf! There's more to gain; whatever is is asailing, conquored;
Peace&Grace,
Sharon |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
10/10/2006 |
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| Good poem Sara. If only life was as simple as riding a wave. Waves all come from the same direction, life comes at you from all directions at once. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/8/2006 |
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A powerful metaphorical offering, Sara. Thanks for sharing it. Love, peace, and strength to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/8/2006 |
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Nicely iced. Too cool. Back to school.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
10/8/2006 |
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And if you fall in. SWIM for your life.
Kewl metaphor... |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/8/2006 |
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You are a good poetic surfer Sara!!
Well done!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
10/8/2006 |
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Excellent take on the subject of life -- the metaphor of life vs wave in a poem is ... "iced" (perfect!)
Warmest regards,
CJ |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/8/2006 |
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interesting and real words of life and living brought to us in the talk of the wave rider, what a stunning comparison,well done Sara.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/8/2006 |
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you ride the waves of life with conviction and determination ...
good poem, Sara ... enjoyed reading ... |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
10/8/2006 |
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Good attitude
cool write..........
very pop........and wise..........good combo sara
paxA |
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| Reviewed by Rusty Daily |
10/8/2006 |
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That was fun to read and yup, it always gets better.
However the pessimist would say, "It always gets darker before it gets pitch." lol
Rusty |
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